Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Workforce employment percentages across six Australian industries from 1989 to 2009

The table below gives information about the percentage of workforce employed in six industries in Australia between 1989 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of workforce employed in six industries in Australia (1989-2009)
Industries19892009
Manufacturing15%9.8%
Retail11.8%10.1%
Health care9.6%11.3%
Construction7.6%8.3%
Education6.8%7.5%
Tourism5.5%7.3%

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Band 8 sample answer

The table illustrates the shifts in the percentage of the workforce employed across six distinct industries in Australia between 1989 and 2009. Overall, it is evident that manufacturing and retail saw a reduction in their share of the workforce, whereas health care, construction, education, and tourism all recorded growth.

In 1989, manufacturing was the leading employer at 15%, followed by retail at 11.8%. By 2009, however, both sectors experienced a downward trend, with manufacturing dropping significantly to 9.8% and retail decreasing to 10.1%. Despite this decline, retail remained the largest employer among the six categories in 2009.

Conversely, the remaining four industries showed an upward trajectory. Health care, which employed 9.6% of the workforce in 1989, became the most prominent sector by 2009, rising to 11.3%. Similarly, the construction industry grew from 7.6% to 8.3%. Education and tourism also saw modest gains, increasing from 6.8% to 7.5% and from 5.5% to 7.3%, respectively. By the end of the period, the gap between the highest and lowest employing industries had narrowed, reflecting a more balanced distribution of the workforce across these sectors.

181 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about tables

downward trend
a steady movement towards a lower numerical value
upward trajectory
a consistent increase in data over a period
proportion
a part or share in relation to whole
modest gains
small but noticeable increases in numerical values
prominent
standing out so as to be clearly visible
narrowed
became smaller in range or distance between values

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

While the manufacturing and retail sectors experienced a decline in their workforce proportions over the two decades, the other four industries saw a steady increase in employment figures.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe tables?

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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