Workforce profile of top management positions in South Africa 2015/16
The charts below show the workforce profile at the top management jobs by ethnicity and race in South Africa based on a 2015/16 report.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
- Foreign national: 3.5
- African: 14.3
- Coloured: 4.7
- Indian: 8.6
- White: 68.9
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| Category | Value |
|---|---|
| Foreign national | 3.5 |
| African | 14.3 |
| Coloured | 4.7 |
| Indian | 8.6 |
| White | 68.9 |
- Private
- Public
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| African | Coloured | Indian | White | Foreign nationals | |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Private | 10.8 | 4.5 | 8.7 | 72.4 | 3.6 |
| Public | 73.2 | 7.4 | 6.5 | 12.6 | 0.4 |
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Band 8 sample answer
The pie chart illustrates the overall ethnic and racial composition of top management positions in South Africa during 2015/16, while the bar chart provides a breakdown of these demographics by public and private sectors. Overall, it is evident that White individuals held the vast majority of top management roles, particularly in the private sector, while the public sector showed a starkly different profile with a high concentration of African employees.
As shown in the pie chart, White people accounted for 68.9% of all top management positions, followed by African (14.3%), Indian (8.6%), Coloured (4.7%), and Foreign national (3.5%) groups. In the private sector, this trend was even more pronounced, with White employees making up 72.4% of the workforce, compared to just 10.8% for African, 8.7% for Indian, 4.5% for Coloured, and 3.6% for Foreign nationals.
Conversely, the public sector was dominated by African employees at 73.2%. White staff represented 12.6% of public sector management, while Coloured, Indian, and Foreign national groups comprised 7.4%, 6.5%, and 0.4% respectively. Notably, the representation of African staff in the public sector was significantly higher than in the private sector, contrasting sharply with the distribution of White employees.
193 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.
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- dominated
- to have a commanding influence or presence
- composition
- the way in which something is put together
- pronounced
- very noticeable, obvious, or strongly marked
- conversely
- introducing a statement that reverses a previous one
- comprised
- to consist of or be made up of
- starkly
- in a way that is very clear and obvious
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What should the overview say?
White employees dominated top management roles overall and within the private sector, whereas the public sector was primarily composed of African staff.
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At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.
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Write one overview sentence that links the two visuals. Give each visual its own detail paragraph. Point out where one chart explains the other.
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