IELTS Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree) · Academic

Should people continue working in their old age?

The question

It is a good idea for people to continue working in their old age if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
I strongly agree that continuing to work in later life is beneficial for both the individual and the economy.
Paragraph 2:
Remaining in the workforce provides elderly individuals with cognitive stimulation and a sense of purpose.
Paragraph 3:
Retaining older workers helps mitigate the economic challenges posed by an ageing population and shrinking labour markets.
  1. State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
  2. Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
  3. A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.

Band 8 sample essay

The debate regarding whether individuals should remain in employment during their later years has gained significant attention as life expectancy increases globally. I firmly believe that encouraging older people to continue working is a positive development that benefits both the individuals themselves and society at large.

From a personal perspective, remaining professionally active provides elderly individuals with essential cognitive stimulation and a meaningful sense of purpose. Retirement can often lead to social isolation and a decline in mental acuity, whereas staying engaged in a workplace environment keeps the mind sharp and fosters social connections. For instance, many retired professionals who transition into consultancy roles report higher levels of life satisfaction and better mental health outcomes compared to those who cease all professional activity abruptly.

Furthermore, from an economic standpoint, retaining older workers is vital for sustaining productivity in ageing societies. With birth rates falling in many developed nations, the workforce is shrinking, which puts immense pressure on pension systems and public services. By allowing and encouraging those who are capable to continue working, governments can ensure a stable tax base and address labour shortages. A clear example of this is Japan, where the government has implemented policies to keep seniors in the workforce, thereby maintaining the productivity levels necessary to support their national economy.

In summary, the decision to work beyond the traditional retirement age offers profound benefits. It preserves the mental well-being of the individual while simultaneously alleviating the fiscal pressures associated with an ageing demographic. Provided that the work is suitable and the individual is willing, this practice should be actively encouraged.

264 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

This essay achieves Band 8 by providing a clear, consistent position and supporting it with well-developed, logical arguments. A Band 6 answer typically fails to provide specific examples or relies on overused, clichéd phrases that lack depth in analysis.

Vocabulary from the essay

mental acuity
sharpness of the mind and ability to think
cease
to bring or come to an end
abruptly
suddenly and in an unexpected or unpleasant way
fiscal
relating to government revenue, especially taxes and money
demographic
a specific segment of the human population group
consultancy
professional expert advice provided to a business client
alleviating
making a problem or suffering less severe overall
sustain
to keep something going or maintain its strength

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Should people continue working in their old age?"?

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 264 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

This essay achieves Band 8 by providing a clear, consistent position and supporting it with well-developed, logical arguments. A Band 6 answer typically fails to provide specific examples or relies on overused, clichéd phrases that lack depth in analysis.

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