Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Renewable energy versus cheaper bills: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 289 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think governments should invest heavily in renewable energy even if this increases household energy bills. Others believe keeping energy affordable should be the priority. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I believe heavy investment in renewables is right, but governments must protect low-income households from the short-term cost.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Supporters argue renewables cut emissions and reduce dependence on imported fuel, which lowers prices in the long run.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Others stress that high bills hurt poorer families most and can create fuel poverty and public opposition.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model289 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Moving from fossil fuels to wind and solar power requires enormous investment, and some of this cost may be passed on to consumers. While some people believe this is a price worth paying, others argue that affordable energy must come first. In my opinion, both goals can be pursued if the costs are shared fairly.

Those in favour of rapid investment make a strong case. Burning coal, oil and gas is the main cause of climate change, and delaying the switch will only make the eventual damage, and the cost of dealing with it, greater. There is also an economic argument. Countries that import most of their fuel are exposed to sudden price rises when supplies are disrupted abroad. Once wind farms and solar panels have been built, the wind and the sun are free, so a large renewable sector may actually make energy cheaper and more stable in the long term.

On the other hand, people who prioritise affordability point out that higher bills affect households very differently. A wealthy family barely notices a small increase, but a pensioner or a low-paid worker may be forced to choose between heating their home and buying food. This so-called fuel poverty can damage health, especially in cold winters. If ordinary people feel that environmental policies are making their lives harder, they may also turn against climate action altogether.

In my view, governments should invest heavily in renewable energy, because the long-term benefits for both the planet and energy security are too important to postpone. However, the burden should not fall on the poorest. Funding could come partly from general taxation rather than from bills, and support schemes such as discounts and home insulation could protect vulnerable households during the transition.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by discussing both views in balanced depth and giving a clear opinion with a practical way forward. Ideas are logically organised, and the conclusion follows naturally from the body paragraphs. Vocabulary such as "fuel poverty" and "energy security" is used accurately and appropriately for an Academic essay.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • fossil fuels

    fuels such as coal, oil and gas formed from ancient plants and animals

  • disrupted

    stopped from continuing normally

  • affordability

    the quality of being cheap enough for people to pay for

  • fuel poverty

    being unable to pay enough to heat a home properly

  • energy security

    having a reliable supply of energy at a reasonable price

  • postpone

    to delay something until a later time

  • insulation

    material used to stop heat escaping from a building

  • transition

    a change from one state or system to another

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for environment.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Renewable energy versus cheaper bills"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 289 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by discussing both views in balanced depth and giving a clear opinion with a practical way forward. Ideas are logically organised, and the conclusion follows naturally from the body paragraphs. Vocabulary such as "fuel poverty" and "energy security" is used accurately and appropriately for an Academic essay.

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