Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Deposit return schemes for bottles: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 282 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some countries add a small deposit to the price of drinks in bottles and cans, which customers get back when they return the empty container. Do the advantages of such schemes outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I believe the advantages of deposit return schemes clearly outweigh the disadvantages.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Deposits sharply increase the number of containers returned, reduce litter and supply clean material for recycling.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Costs for shops and inconvenience for customers are real but manageable through good design.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model282 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Deposit return schemes reward people for bringing back empty drinks containers by refunding a small sum that was added when the drink was bought. Although such schemes involve some costs and inconvenience, I believe their advantages clearly outweigh their drawbacks.

The main benefit is that they give people a direct financial reason to return bottles and cans rather than throwing them away. Even a small deposit changes behaviour, because an empty bottle now has value. Containers left on beaches or in parks are often collected by others who want the refund, so litter falls noticeably. Furthermore, the material that is returned is clean and already separated by type, which makes it far easier and cheaper to recycle than mixed household waste. Plastic and aluminium can therefore be turned into new containers rather than being buried or burned, reducing the need for new raw materials.

There are, however, some disadvantages. Shops must find space for collection machines or storage areas, and staff time is needed to handle returned containers, which adds to running costs. Small corner shops, in particular, may struggle with these requirements. For customers, the scheme requires effort: they must store empty bottles at home and carry them back to a shop. Some may also object to paying a higher price at the till, especially if they rarely return their containers.

Nevertheless, these problems can be reduced through careful design. Governments can allow small shops to opt out or offer them financial support, and collection points can be placed at supermarkets that people visit regularly anyway. Overall, because deposit schemes reduce litter, improve recycling and encourage people to value resources, I consider their benefits to be far greater than their costs.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining how the scheme works and directly answering whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Each paragraph is well developed and logically connected, and the conclusion reflects the reasoning in the body. The writer shows accurate control of complex sentences and precise topic vocabulary.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • refunding

    giving back money that someone has paid

  • litter

    rubbish left lying in a public place

  • raw materials

    basic natural substances used to make products

  • aluminium

    a light silver-coloured metal used for drinks cans

  • running costs

    the money needed to operate a business or machine

  • opt out

    to choose not to take part in something

  • collection points

    places where people can bring items to be gathered

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for environment.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Deposit return schemes for bottles"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 282 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining how the scheme works and directly answering whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Each paragraph is well developed and logically connected, and the conclusion reflects the reasoning in the body. The writer shows accurate control of complex sentences and precise topic vocabulary.

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