Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

Why fewer people want to teach: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 287 words
  • Problem and solution
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many countries, fewer young people want to become teachers, and schools are struggling to fill vacancies. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The shortage stems from the demanding nature of teaching and its low rewards, but practical steps can make the job more attractive.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Heavy workloads, uncompetitive pay and difficult pupil behaviour discourage graduates from teaching.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Cutting paperwork, raising salaries in shortage subjects and supporting discipline would attract and keep teachers.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model287 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Schools in many parts of the world are finding it increasingly difficult to recruit teachers, and some classes are now taught by staff without a qualification in the subject. This shortage stems mainly from the demanding nature of the job and its relatively low rewards, but governments and schools could take practical steps to make the profession more attractive.

The first cause is workload. Beyond teaching lessons, teachers are expected to plan, mark, write reports, attend meetings and communicate with parents, which frequently extends their working day well into the evening. Young graduates who observe this may decide that the job is incompatible with a balanced life. The second cause is pay. In many countries, a graduate can earn considerably more in business or technology, so capable candidates in subjects such as mathematics or computing are drawn to other careers. Finally, teachers often report that behaviour problems and a lack of respect from some parents have made classrooms more stressful.

To address these issues, governments should first reduce unnecessary administrative tasks, for example by simplifying reporting requirements and employing assistants to handle routine paperwork. This would allow teachers to concentrate on teaching itself. Secondly, salaries should be made more competitive, particularly in subjects where shortages are most severe, and new teachers could be offered incentives such as help with repaying student loans. Schools also need clear behaviour policies supported by senior staff, so that teachers do not feel alone when dealing with disruptive pupils.

In conclusion, the teacher shortage is largely the result of heavy workloads, modest pay and difficult working conditions. Reducing paperwork, improving salaries and strengthening support for discipline would encourage more talented graduates to enter the profession and, equally importantly, to remain in it.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: causes and solutions are clearly matched, and each point is explained rather than merely listed. The writer uses a wide range of accurate vocabulary, such as 'incompatible' and 'administrative', and controls complex sentences with few errors.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • recruit

    to find and employ new people

  • stems

    comes from or is caused by

  • workload

    the amount of work a person has to do

  • incompatible

    not able to exist or work together

  • administrative

    relating to organising and managing paperwork

  • incentives

    things that encourage people to act in a certain way

  • disruptive

    causing trouble and stopping something from continuing normally

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for education.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Why fewer people want to teach"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 287 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: causes and solutions are clearly matched, and each point is explained rather than merely listed. The writer uses a wide range of accurate vocabulary, such as 'incompatible' and 'administrative', and controls complex sentences with few errors.

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