Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Why many crimes go unreported: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 303 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many crimes are never reported to the police. Why do you think this happens? What could be done to encourage people to report crimes?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Crimes go unreported mainly because victims doubt it will help or fear the consequences, and reporting can be encouraged by making it easier and treating victims better.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Victims may think the police will not act, fear the offender, feel embarrassed or distrust the police.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Simpler reporting, regular updates, anonymous options and neighbourhood policing would build confidence.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model303 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

A significant proportion of crimes never come to the attention of the police, which means that offenders go unpunished and the true scale of some problems remains hidden. In my view, this happens mainly because victims doubt that reporting will help or fear the consequences of doing so, and it could be addressed by making reporting easier and by treating victims with greater care.

There are several reasons why people stay silent. Many victims of minor offences, such as the theft of a bicycle or damage to a car, believe that the police will be unable or unwilling to investigate, so reporting seems a waste of time. Others, particularly victims of domestic abuse or harassment, may be afraid of the offender, especially if that person is a partner, relative or neighbour. Some victims also feel embarrassed, for instance after being deceived by a scam, and prefer to keep the experience private. In certain communities, a lack of trust in the police, sometimes based on past experience, discourages people from coming forward at all.

Various steps could encourage more reporting. First, the process should be made simpler, for example through online forms and dedicated phone lines, so that minor crimes can be reported in a few minutes. Second, police forces should keep victims informed about the progress of their case, since people are more likely to report again if they see that their information was taken seriously. Third, specialist support services and anonymous reporting options would help victims who fear retaliation. Finally, building relationships with local communities through regular meetings and neighbourhood officers can gradually restore trust where it has been lost.

In conclusion, crimes go unreported largely because of doubt, fear and mistrust. Simpler reporting procedures, better communication and stronger protection for victims would give people greater confidence that speaking up is worthwhile.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered directly in separate, well-developed paragraphs, and the introduction previews the answer to each. Sequencing words organise the solutions clearly, and the vocabulary shows awareness of register and collocation, as in 'fear retaliation' and 'restore trust'.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • come to the attention of

    become known to

  • harassment

    repeated behaviour that frightens or upsets someone

  • deceived

    tricked into believing something false

  • coming forward

    offering information to the authorities

  • anonymous

    without giving one's name

  • retaliation

    harmful action taken against someone in revenge

  • mistrust

    a feeling that someone cannot be relied upon

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Why many crimes go unreported"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 303 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered directly in separate, well-developed paragraphs, and the introduction previews the answer to each. Sequencing words organise the solutions clearly, and the vocabulary shows awareness of register and collocation, as in 'fear retaliation' and 'restore trust'.

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