Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Prison: punishment or rehabilitation: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 293 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think that the main purpose of prisons should be to punish criminals, while others believe it should be to rehabilitate them so they can return to society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Punishment is an unavoidable part of prison, but rehabilitation should be its central aim.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Supporters of punishment argue that justice requires a proportionate consequence and that harsh conditions deter crime.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Supporters of rehabilitation note that nearly all prisoners are released, so education and treatment protect the public by preventing reoffending.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model293 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Opinions differ on what prisons are fundamentally for. Some people see them mainly as a means of punishing those who break the law, whereas others believe their chief role is to reform offenders so that they can live lawfully after release. In my opinion, punishment is an unavoidable part of imprisonment, but rehabilitation should be its central aim.

Those who stress punishment argue that justice requires offenders to suffer a consequence proportionate to the harm they have caused. Victims and their families often feel that a comfortable prison regime with generous privileges fails to reflect the seriousness of the crime. In addition, a sentence that is clearly unpleasant may act as a deterrent, discouraging both the offender and others from committing similar crimes. From this perspective, the loss of liberty and the hardship of prison life are the whole point of the sentence.

On the other hand, supporters of rehabilitation point out that almost every prisoner will eventually be released, so the real question is what kind of person walks out of the gate. If inmates spend years in idleness, they are likely to return to crime, which creates new victims. Prisons that offer literacy classes, drug treatment and work placements, by contrast, address the problems that led to offending in the first place. A former inmate who has learned a trade and has a job waiting is far less likely to reoffend than one who leaves with no skills and no support.

In my view, the loss of freedom is itself a significant punishment, so prison does not need to be deliberately harsh to be just. Since the public is best protected when former prisoners do not reoffend, rehabilitation is the more sensible priority, provided that sentences remain proportionate to the crime.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both views are presented fairly in separate paragraphs and the writer's own opinion is clear in the introduction and conclusion. Ideas progress logically from principle to consequence, and the range of complex sentences, including conditional and relative clauses, is used accurately.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • proportionate

    matching the size or seriousness of something

  • regime

    the set of rules and conditions under which a place is run

  • deterrent

    something that discourages people from doing something

  • liberty

    the freedom to live as you choose

  • idleness

    the state of having nothing useful to do

  • reoffend

    to commit another crime after being punished for an earlier one

  • rehabilitation

    helping someone return to a normal, law-abiding life

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Prison: punishment or rehabilitation"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 293 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both views are presented fairly in separate paragraphs and the writer's own opinion is clear in the introduction and conclusion. Ideas progress logically from principle to consequence, and the range of complex sentences, including conditional and relative clauses, is used accurately.

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