Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Publishing convicted criminals' names online: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 295 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

In some countries, the names and photographs of people convicted of crimes are published online. Do the advantages of this practice outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Publication offers some safety and deterrence benefits, but its disadvantages are greater, especially for minor offenders.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Publishing details may help people protect themselves, deter crime through fear of shame and build confidence in justice.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Online records last indefinitely, block jobs and housing, expose families to harassment and lack context.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model295 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In some countries, the authorities publish the names and photographs of convicted criminals on official websites. Although this practice offers some benefits in terms of public safety and deterrence, I believe its disadvantages are more significant, particularly for minor offenders.

Supporters of publication argue that it helps people protect themselves. If residents can see that someone living nearby has been convicted of fraud or violent crime, they may take sensible precautions, such as being cautious about lending money or leaving children unsupervised. Publicity may also act as a deterrent, since many people fear public shame more than a fine. A business owner tempted to cheat customers, for example, might reconsider if a conviction would be visible to anyone searching his name. In addition, openness about who has been convicted can strengthen public confidence that the justice system is working.

However, the drawbacks are considerable. Once information is placed online, it can remain accessible indefinitely, even after an offender has served the sentence and changed their behaviour. This makes it extremely difficult for former offenders to find jobs or housing, and people who are excluded from legitimate work are more likely to return to crime. Publication can also expose offenders and their families to harassment or even violence, and innocent relatives may suffer for crimes they did not commit. Finally, there is a danger that online records are shared without context, so that a person convicted of a minor offence many years ago is treated as a serious threat.

On balance, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. While there may be a case for informing the public about a small number of dangerous offenders, publishing the details of all convicted people punishes them long after their sentence ends and makes rehabilitation far harder to achieve.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the question is answered directly and the final judgement is qualified sensibly for dangerous offenders. Each paragraph builds a chain of cause and effect, and the vocabulary, including 'indefinitely' and 'legitimate work', is accurate and appropriate in register.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • precautions

    actions taken in advance to avoid danger

  • public shame

    embarrassment caused by others knowing about one's wrongdoing

  • conviction

    an official decision by a court that someone is guilty

  • indefinitely

    for a period with no fixed end

  • legitimate

    legal and acceptable

  • without context

    without the background information needed to understand something

  • on balance

    after considering all the facts

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Publishing convicted criminals' names online"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 295 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the question is answered directly and the final judgement is qualified sensibly for dangerous offenders. Each paragraph builds a chain of cause and effect, and the vocabulary, including 'indefinitely' and 'legitimate work', is accurate and appropriate in register.

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