Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

More police patrols to reduce crime: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 305 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people believe that having more police officers patrolling the streets is the best way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    A visible police presence reduces some crime, but it is not the best solution on its own because it does not address why people offend.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Regular patrols deter opportunistic crime, reassure residents and help officers build useful local relationships.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Many crimes happen out of sight and stem from social problems, so investment in youth services and treatment has a more lasting effect.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model305 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

It is often suggested that the most effective response to crime is to put more police officers on the streets. While I agree that a visible police presence can reduce certain types of crime, I do not believe it is the best solution on its own, as it does little to address the reasons why people offend.

There is no doubt that regular patrols have clear benefits. When officers are visible in town centres, on public transport and in residential areas, potential offenders are more likely to think twice before committing crimes such as shoplifting, vandalism or street robbery. A visible presence also reassures residents, who may feel safer walking home at night, and allows officers to build relationships with local people, who are then more willing to report suspicious behaviour. In neighbourhoods where officers know shopkeepers and residents by name, problems can often be dealt with before they escalate.

However, patrols mainly move crime elsewhere or delay it rather than preventing it altogether. Many offences, including domestic abuse, online fraud and drug dealing, take place behind closed doors or on screens, where a patrolling officer will never see them. Moreover, a great deal of crime is linked to deeper problems such as unemployment, addiction and a lack of opportunities for young people. A teenager with no qualifications and no prospects may simply wait until officers have moved on. For this reason, investment in youth services, addiction treatment and job training is likely to have a more lasting effect than additional patrols, which are also extremely expensive to maintain.

In conclusion, increasing police numbers on the streets is a useful measure that can deter opportunistic crime and reassure the public. Nevertheless, it cannot be considered the best way to reduce crime, since long-term reductions depend on tackling the social conditions that lead people to offend.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer takes a nuanced position, concedes the strengths of the opposing view and then explains its limits with relevant examples. Cohesive devices are varied rather than mechanical, and collocations such as 'deter opportunistic crime' show a flexible lexical resource.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • visible presence

    being easily seen in a place, especially by the public

  • vandalism

    deliberate damage to public or private property

  • reassures

    makes someone feel less worried

  • escalate

    to become more serious or intense

  • prospects

    chances of future success, especially in work

  • opportunistic

    done because a chance suddenly appears, not planned in advance

  • deter

    to discourage someone from doing something

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "More police patrols to reduce crime"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 305 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer takes a nuanced position, concedes the strengths of the opposing view and then explains its limits with relevant examples. Cohesive devices are varied rather than mechanical, and collocations such as 'deter opportunistic crime' show a flexible lexical resource.

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