Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Why fewer people volunteer: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 290 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many communities, fewer people are doing voluntary work than in the past. Why is this? How could more people be encouraged to volunteer?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Volunteering has declined for several reasons, and organisations, employers and governments can all help reverse it.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    People have less free time, weaker ties to their local area and are put off by formal procedures.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Flexible short roles, paid volunteering days and a simple local listings website would encourage more people.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model290 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Charities, sports clubs and community groups rely heavily on volunteers, yet many report that fewer people are offering their time than in previous decades. This decline has several causes, and I believe that organisations, employers and governments can all play a part in reversing it.

The main reason for the fall in volunteering is lack of time. Many adults now work longer or less predictable hours, and in households where both partners are employed, evenings and weekends are often devoted to childcare and household tasks. A second reason is that people are more likely to move house for work, so they have weaker ties to their local area and feel less inclined to contribute to it. Finally, some potential volunteers are discouraged by formal requirements, such as lengthy application forms, training courses and background checks, which can make a simple wish to help feel like applying for a job.

Several measures could encourage more people to volunteer. Organisations could offer flexible and short-term opportunities, such as helping at a single event or doing a few hours of online work from home, which suit people with busy schedules. Employers might also give staff one or two paid volunteering days each year; a company that allows its employees to spend a day repairing a community garden, for example, benefits the neighbourhood while also improving team spirit. In addition, local councils could create a simple website listing opportunities in the area, making it easier for residents to find a role that matches their interests.

In conclusion, people volunteer less mainly because of time pressures, weaker community ties and complicated procedures. Offering flexible roles, workplace volunteering days and clearer information would make it much easier for people to give their time to good causes.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered directly, with three distinct reasons and practical suggestions that respond to them. Ideas are clearly organised, and the writer uses accurate, varied vocabulary such as 'inclined' and 'procedures' within complex sentences.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • devoted

    given completely to a particular purpose

  • ties

    connections or relationships with a place or people

  • inclined

    wanting or likely to do something

  • discouraged

    made to feel less willing to do something

  • flexible

    able to change to suit different needs

  • schedules

    plans of what someone will do and when

  • procedures

    official ways of doing something

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for society.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Why fewer people volunteer"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 290 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered directly, with three distinct reasons and practical suggestions that respond to them. Ideas are clearly organised, and the writer uses accurate, varied vocabulary such as 'inclined' and 'procedures' within complex sentences.

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