Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Why families are getting smaller: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 299 words
  • Two-part question
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many countries, families are becoming smaller than they were in the past. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Families are shrinking mainly because of economic and social change, which is largely positive for households but creates challenges for society.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Children are costly, women have more education and careers, child survival has improved and family planning is available.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Parents can invest more in each child, but low birth rates create an ageing population and pressure on only children.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

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Band 8-style model299 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many parts of the world, the typical family is now much smaller than it was a few generations ago, with couples having one or two children rather than five or six. In my view, this trend is driven mainly by economic and social change, and it is a largely positive development for families themselves, although it creates challenges for society as a whole.

Several factors explain why families are shrinking. Raising a child has become far more expensive, particularly in cities, where housing, childcare and education consume a large share of household income. At the same time, more women are completing higher education and building careers, which often leads them to start families later and have fewer children. Improvements in healthcare are also significant: when most children survive into adulthood, parents no longer feel the need to have many children to ensure that some will support them in old age. Finally, access to family planning gives couples far greater control over when and whether to have children.

For individual families, this change is mostly positive. Parents with fewer children can devote more time, attention and money to each one, for example by paying for extra lessons or saving for university. Women in particular gain more freedom to combine family life with paid work. However, the wider consequences are less favourable. When birth rates remain low for long periods, the population ages, leaving a smaller working-age population to fund pensions and care for the elderly. Children without siblings may also face the full responsibility of supporting their parents later in life.

In conclusion, families are becoming smaller because children are costly, women have more opportunities and child survival has improved. While this benefits individual households, governments will need to plan carefully for the economic pressures of an ageing society.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered fully, and the evaluation distinguishes between effects on families and effects on society. A range of causes is presented logically, and the vocabulary of demographics, such as 'birth rates' and 'working-age population', is used accurately.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • consume

    to use up a quantity of something

  • family planning

    controlling how many children to have and when

  • devote

    to give time, money or effort to something

  • birth rates

    the number of babies born in a population over a period

  • working-age population

    people old enough and young enough to have jobs

  • siblings

    brothers and sisters

  • ageing society

    a society in which the proportion of older people is growing

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for family.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Why families are getting smaller"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 299 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered fully, and the evaluation distinguishes between effects on families and effects on society. A range of causes is presented logically, and the vocabulary of demographics, such as 'birth rates' and 'working-age population', is used accurately.

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