Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

Shortage of skilled tradespeople: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 296 words
  • Problem and solution
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many countries do not have enough skilled tradespeople, such as plumbers, electricians and builders. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The shortage is caused mainly by negative attitudes to manual work and weak training routes, which education and policy can address.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Trades are seen as less prestigious, apprenticeships are scarce, and many experienced workers are retiring.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Equal status in school guidance, incentives for firms that train apprentices and mentoring by retirees would help.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model296 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many countries, homeowners report long waits for a plumber or an electrician, and construction projects are delayed because there are not enough skilled workers. This shortage is mainly caused by negative attitudes towards manual work and weaknesses in training, but these problems can be addressed through changes in education and policy.

The first cause is that trades are often regarded as less prestigious than office-based careers. Young people are frequently encouraged by schools and parents to go to university, and vocational paths are presented as an option for those who are less academic. As a result, capable students may never seriously consider becoming an electrician, even though the work is skilled and often well paid. A second cause is the difficulty of entering a trade. Apprenticeships can be scarce, and small businesses may be unwilling to spend time and money training a young person. Finally, in many countries a large proportion of experienced tradespeople are approaching retirement, and they are not being replaced quickly enough.

Several measures could improve the situation. Schools should give vocational careers equal status in their guidance, for example by inviting tradespeople to speak to pupils and offering practical courses alongside academic subjects. Governments could also provide financial incentives for small firms that take on apprentices, which would reduce the cost of training. In addition, retiring workers might be encouraged to mentor trainees part-time, so that their knowledge is passed on rather than lost. Promoting these careers to women, who remain underrepresented in most trades, would further increase the number of potential recruits.

In conclusion, the shortage of tradespeople stems from low status, limited training places and an ageing workforce. Raising the profile of vocational careers and supporting apprenticeships would help ensure that these essential skills are available in the future.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: three causes are identified and each is matched by a relevant solution, so the task is fully addressed. The writer uses topic-specific vocabulary such as 'vocational' and 'apprenticeships' accurately, and links ideas clearly within and between paragraphs.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • manual

    involving physical work with the hands

  • prestigious

    respected and admired

  • vocational

    relating to skills needed for a particular job

  • apprenticeships

    periods of training on the job with a skilled worker

  • scarce

    in short supply

  • underrepresented

    present in smaller numbers than would be fair or expected

  • recruits

    new people who join an organisation or profession

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for work and careers.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Shortage of skilled tradespeople"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 296 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: three causes are identified and each is matched by a relevant solution, so the task is fully addressed. The writer uses topic-specific vocabulary such as 'vocational' and 'apprenticeships' accurately, and links ideas clearly within and between paragraphs.

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