Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Short breaks instead of one long holiday: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 307 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Nowadays many people take several short trips abroad each year instead of one long holiday. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Short trips abroad are popular because of cheap travel and busy working lives, but the trend is mainly negative because of its environmental cost.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Budget airlines, online booking, pressure at work and social media all encourage short breaks.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Frequent breaks can reduce stress, but extra flights add emissions and crowd popular cities.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model307 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In the past, many families saved up for a single long summer holiday, but today a large number of people prefer several short trips abroad throughout the year. This trend is mainly driven by cheaper travel and changing work patterns, and while it has personal benefits, I consider it a largely negative development because of its environmental cost.

There are several reasons for this change. Budget airlines and online booking platforms have made it possible to fly to another country for a weekend at a relatively low price, sometimes for less than a long train journey at home. At the same time, many employees find it difficult to take two or three weeks off work at once, either because of heavy workloads or because they worry about falling behind. A long weekend in a nearby capital is easier to fit around these pressures. Social media also plays a part, as people are encouraged to collect new destinations rather than spend a long time in one place.

From an individual point of view, frequent short breaks can be refreshing. Regular time away from work may reduce stress more effectively than one holiday a year, and travellers get to experience a variety of cultures. However, the wider consequences are more troubling. Each short trip usually involves two flights, so a person who takes four city breaks a year may produce far more emissions than someone who takes one longer holiday. Popular cities also suffer, as a constant stream of weekend visitors adds to overcrowding and pushes up rents for local residents.

In conclusion, short trips abroad have become popular because they are cheap and convenient for busy workers. Although they offer real benefits for well-being, their impact on the climate and on crowded destinations makes this a mostly negative trend, unless travellers choose rail journeys or fewer, longer stays.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions directly, with one body paragraph for the causes and one for the evaluation. The writer weighs a personal benefit against wider consequences before reaching a clear judgement, and the conclusion adds a useful condition rather than simply repeating earlier points.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • budget airlines

    airlines that offer cheap tickets with few extra services

  • workloads

    the amount of work a person has to do

  • falling behind

    failing to keep up with work that needs doing

  • refreshing

    making someone feel rested and full of energy

  • troubling

    causing worry or concern

  • emissions

    harmful gases released into the air

  • pushes up

    causes something, such as prices, to rise

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for travel and transport.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Short breaks instead of one long holiday"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 307 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions directly, with one body paragraph for the causes and one for the evaluation. The writer weighs a personal benefit against wider consequences before reaching a clear judgement, and the conclusion adds a useful condition rather than simply repeating earlier points.

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