Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Holidays at home or abroad: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 313 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people prefer to spend their holidays in their own country, while others prefer to travel abroad. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Holidays at home deserve more attention, although occasional trips abroad remain valuable.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Domestic holidays are cheaper, less stressful and help people discover their own country.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Travelling abroad offers new languages, food and customs that broaden people's outlook.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model313 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

When planning a holiday, people often face a choice between exploring their own country and travelling overseas. Both options have clear attractions, but I believe that holidays at home deserve more attention than they usually receive, even though trips abroad remain valuable from time to time.

Those who prefer domestic holidays usually mention convenience and cost. There is no need for passports, visas or long flights, and travellers can often reach their destination by car or train in a few hours. This makes a short break far less stressful, especially for families with young children. Moreover, many people know surprisingly little about their own country. A family living in a large city might never have visited the national parks, coastal villages or historic towns only a short journey away, and holidaying locally also supports small businesses in their own economy.

On the other hand, travelling abroad offers experiences that are difficult to find at home. Encountering a different language, cuisine and way of life can be exciting and educational, and it often encourages people to question their assumptions. Someone who spends a week in a country with very different customs may return with a broader perspective on their own culture. For people living in places with cold or rainy weather, a holiday abroad may also be the only reliable way to enjoy some sunshine.

In my view, the best approach is to combine the two. Regular short breaks within one's own country are affordable, less harmful to the environment and a good way to discover nearby places, while an occasional trip abroad provides the wider cultural experience that cannot be found at home. Neither option is superior in every situation.

In conclusion, domestic and overseas holidays each have their merits. The choice should depend on budget, time and purpose, but I would encourage people not to overlook what lies on their own doorstep.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving each view a developed paragraph with a concrete illustration and then reaching a clear, reasoned opinion. Referencing and linking are handled smoothly, and the closing idiom is used naturally rather than as memorised decoration.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • domestic

    inside one's own country

  • holidaying

    spending a holiday somewhere

  • cuisine

    a style of cooking typical of a place

  • assumptions

    beliefs accepted as true without proof

  • broader perspective

    a wider way of seeing things

  • merits

    good qualities or advantages

  • on their own doorstep

    very close to where someone lives

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for travel and transport.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Holidays at home or abroad"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 313 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving each view a developed paragraph with a concrete illustration and then reaching a clear, reasoned opinion. Referencing and linking are handled smoothly, and the closing idiom is used naturally rather than as memorised decoration.

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