Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

High-speed rail instead of short flights: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 317 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people believe that governments should replace short domestic flights with high-speed rail services. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I largely agree that short domestic flights should be replaced by high-speed rail, but only where a fast and affordable train service exists.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Rail produces far less pollution per passenger than short flights, which burn most of their fuel during take-off and landing.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    City-centre stations and shorter check-in times make a train journey as quick as a short flight once hidden delays are counted.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model317 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Short flights between cities in the same country are a familiar part of modern travel, yet they produce a large amount of carbon for the distance covered. I largely agree that governments should replace these routes with high-speed rail, although this should happen only where a fast and affordable train service genuinely exists.

The strongest argument for the change is environmental. A train powered by electricity, particularly from renewable sources, produces far less pollution per passenger than an aircraft, which burns much of its fuel during take-off and landing. On a short route, those stages make up a large share of the journey, so the flight is especially inefficient. If a government ended such flights once a rail alternative was available, travellers would still reach their destination while the country moved closer to its climate targets. Some European governments have already restricted domestic flights on routes where the train takes only a few hours, which suggests that the policy is practical rather than idealistic.

There is also a convincing argument based on convenience. Airports are usually built far from city centres, and passengers must arrive early to pass through security. Railway stations, by contrast, are often located in the heart of a city, so a business traveller can step off a train and walk straight to a meeting. When these hidden delays are taken into account, a three-hour rail journey can be as quick as a one-hour flight, and passengers can work or rest throughout it.

Nevertheless, this policy would be unfair in countries where rail networks are slow, expensive or absent. Banning flights before investing in new lines would simply leave remote regions isolated and push travellers back into their cars.

In conclusion, I agree with replacing short domestic flights with high-speed rail, provided that governments first build reliable lines and keep fares competitive. Under those conditions, the change would benefit both passengers and the environment.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the qualified position is stated at the start and kept consistent, and the limitation in the fourth paragraph shows a nuanced task response. Paragraphs are linked with clear signposting such as "by contrast" and "nevertheless", and conditional structures are used accurately to explain consequences.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • domestic flights

    flights that start and end in the same country

  • renewable sources

    types of energy, such as wind and solar, that do not run out

  • inefficient

    wasting energy, time or money

  • climate targets

    goals a country sets for cutting harmful gases

  • idealistic

    based on hopes rather than what can really be done

  • hidden delays

    time lost in ways people do not notice at first

  • competitive

    not more expensive than the alternatives

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for travel and transport.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "High-speed rail instead of short flights"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 317 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the qualified position is stated at the start and kept consistent, and the limitation in the fourth paragraph shows a nuanced task response. Paragraphs are linked with clear signposting such as "by contrast" and "nevertheless", and conditional structures are used accurately to explain consequences.

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