Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Higher income tax for high earners: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 307 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

People who earn high salaries should pay a much higher rate of income tax than those on average incomes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I agree that high earners should pay a considerably higher rate, as long as rates do not discourage work and investment.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Higher rates are fair because the rich can afford more and benefit greatly from public investment.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Revenue from top incomes can reduce inequality by funding services that widen opportunity.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model307 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In most countries, income tax rates rise as earnings increase, but there is ongoing debate about how much more high earners should pay. I agree that people on high salaries should pay a considerably higher rate of tax, although rates should not be set so high that they discourage work and investment.

The main justification for higher rates is fairness. A person earning a very large salary can pay a higher percentage in tax and still enjoy a comfortable standard of living, whereas the same percentage taken from a low income might make it difficult to afford rent or food. Moreover, high earners often benefit substantially from public investment, including educated employees, reliable transport and a stable legal system that protects their businesses and property. It is therefore reasonable that they contribute more towards maintaining these services.

Higher taxes on top incomes can also reduce inequality. When the gap between rich and poor grows very wide, it can weaken social cohesion and limit opportunities for children from poorer families. Revenue raised from high earners can fund schools, healthcare and training programmes that give everyone a fairer chance to succeed. For example, money raised in this way could pay for free early-years education, which helps disadvantaged children start school on an equal footing with their classmates.

However, there are limits to this approach. If rates become excessive, some highly skilled professionals and entrepreneurs may move abroad, reduce their working hours or find ways to avoid tax, which could actually reduce government revenue. Tax rates must therefore be high enough to be fair but not so high that they drive talent and investment away.

In conclusion, I believe a significantly higher tax rate for high earners is justified on grounds of fairness and social cohesion, provided that it is set at a level that does not undermine economic activity.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer agrees but sets a clear limit, and this qualified position is maintained consistently. Arguments are supported with logical explanation and a specific example, and phrases such as 'on an equal footing' and 'social cohesion' are used accurately.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • justification

    a good reason for doing something

  • substantially

    to a large degree

  • social cohesion

    the bonds that keep members of a society united

  • revenue

    money that a government receives, mainly from taxes

  • disadvantaged

    having less money and fewer opportunities than others

  • on an equal footing

    with the same rights and chances as others

  • entrepreneurs

    people who start and run their own businesses

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Higher income tax for high earners"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 307 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the writer agrees but sets a clear limit, and this qualified position is maintained consistently. Arguments are supported with logical explanation and a specific example, and phrases such as 'on an equal footing' and 'social cohesion' are used accurately.

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