Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Government services moving online: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 301 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many governments now provide public services online, such as applying for official documents or paying taxes. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The shift is driven by cost and public expectations, and it is largely positive if offline users are not left behind.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Online services are cheaper to run, and citizens used to online banking expect the same convenience.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Services become available any time and easier to track, but some people are excluded and data security is a concern.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model301 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Increasingly, governments allow citizens to complete tasks such as renewing a passport, paying taxes or registering a business online rather than in person. This shift is driven mainly by the desire to cut costs and meet public expectations, and I believe it is a largely positive development, provided that people without internet access are not left behind.

There are two main reasons for this trend. First, online services are cheaper to run. Processing an online form requires far fewer staff than operating offices where officials handle paper documents and answer questions face to face, so governments under financial pressure see digital services as a way to save money. Second, citizens have become used to managing their lives online, from shopping to banking, and they expect public services to be equally convenient. A person who can transfer money in seconds on a phone is likely to be frustrated by having to queue in a government office during working hours.

For most people, this development is beneficial. Online services are available at any time, so citizens no longer need to take time off work or travel long distances to complete simple tasks. Applications can be tracked online, which reduces uncertainty, and digital records may reduce errors caused by lost paperwork. However, there are drawbacks. Elderly people, those on low incomes and people with disabilities may lack the devices, internet connection or skills required, and they risk being excluded from essential services. Online systems also raise concerns about data security, since government databases hold sensitive personal information.

In conclusion, governments are moving services online to reduce costs and meet modern expectations. This is a positive change overall, but it should be accompanied by strong data protection and by alternative options, such as telephone support and local offices, for those who cannot use digital services.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered directly, and the evaluation considers benefits and risks before reaching a clear conclusion. Each paragraph is unified by a clear topic sentence, and the concrete comparison with online banking supports the argument effectively.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • in person

    physically present rather than by phone or online

  • left behind

    unable to keep up with others or with change

  • face to face

    in each other's presence

  • convenient

    easy to use and fitting in well with one's plans

  • paperwork

    forms and documents that must be completed

  • excluded

    prevented from taking part or getting access

  • sensitive personal information

    private details that could cause harm if shared

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Government services moving online"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 301 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are answered directly, and the evaluation considers benefits and risks before reaching a clear conclusion. Each paragraph is unified by a clear topic sentence, and the concrete comparison with online banking supports the argument effectively.

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