Government spending on space exploration: to what extent agree
The question
The government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of the public. To what extent do you agree? (2017, 2020)
About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.
Plan before you write
- Position:
- I believe that while addressing immediate societal issues is vital, space exploration provides long-term benefits that justify government funding.
- Paragraph 2:
- Public funds must prioritise urgent domestic challenges such as poverty and healthcare to ensure the immediate well-being of citizens.
- Paragraph 3:
- Investing in space discovery fosters technological innovation and scientific advancement that eventually yield tangible improvements to life on Earth.
- State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
- Two body paragraphs that each give one reason for that position, with an example.
- A partial position is fine if it is stated precisely; a position that drifts is what caps task response at 6.
Band 8 sample essay
The allocation of public funds towards space exploration has long been a subject of intense debate. While critics argue that such expenditure is frivolous given the myriad of domestic hardships, I believe that scientific discovery beyond our atmosphere is a necessary investment for humanity's future progress.
Undeniably, governments have a primary duty to address the immediate needs of their population. Issues such as inadequate healthcare, systemic poverty, and crumbling infrastructure require substantial financial resources to resolve. When citizens struggle to access basic services, spending billions on searching for extraterrestrial life can appear disconnected from reality. For instance, redirecting funds from space agencies towards public housing projects could offer tangible relief to millions, thereby enhancing the living standards of the most vulnerable members of society.
However, viewing space exploration solely as a drain on resources overlooks the indirect benefits of such research. The pursuit of knowledge regarding other planets often necessitates breakthroughs in materials science, robotics, and telecommunications. These advancements frequently transition from space programmes into the commercial sector, solving earthly problems in unexpected ways. For example, the development of satellite technology, originally intended for orbital missions, now serves as the backbone for global positioning systems and climate monitoring, both of which are essential for modern economic and environmental stability.
In summary, while the imperative to solve current social problems is clear, it should not come at the expense of scientific endeavour. A balanced approach, where governments continue to fund space exploration alongside social programmes, ensures that we address the needs of today while simultaneously securing the technological foundations for tomorrow.
260 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.
Why this scores Band 8
This essay earns a Band 8 by maintaining a clear position throughout and providing a nuanced argument that balances immediate needs with long-term technological gain. A Band 6 response often fails to provide specific examples of how space exploration benefits Earth, relying instead on vague generalisations about the importance of science.
Vocabulary from the essay
- myriad
- a countless or extremely great number of things
- frivolous
- not having any serious purpose or real value
- systemic
- relating to an entire system rather than parts
- tangible
- clear and definite enough to be touched or felt
- overlooks
- failing to notice or consider something important
- necessitates
- to make something necessary as a result
- imperative
- an essential or urgent thing that must happen
- endeavour
- an attempt to achieve a goal or objective
Write this one yourself and get a band
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Frequently asked questions
What type of essay is "Government spending on space exploration: to what extent agree"?
Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the last sentence of the introduction and keep it to the end.
How long should the answer be?
At least 250 words. This sample is 260 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.
What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?
This essay earns a Band 8 by maintaining a clear position throughout and providing a nuanced argument that balances immediate needs with long-term technological gain. A Band 6 response often fails to provide specific examples of how space exploration benefits Earth, relying instead on vague generalisations about the importance of science.
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