Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Higher taxes on air travel: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 291 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Air travel is one of the fastest-growing sources of pollution. Some people believe that flights should be taxed much more heavily to reduce their environmental impact. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I agree that flights should be taxed more heavily, provided the tax is designed fairly and the money funds cleaner alternatives.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Air fares do not reflect the environmental cost of flying, and higher prices would reduce unnecessary short flights.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    To be fair, taxes should fall most on frequent flyers and fund rail and cleaner aircraft rather than simply punishing occasional travellers.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model291 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Cheap flights have made international travel possible for millions of people, but aviation produces large amounts of greenhouse gases. It has therefore been proposed that flying should be taxed much more heavily. I agree with this proposal, although the way such a tax is designed is crucial.

The strongest argument in favour is that the current price of a flight does not reflect its true cost. When a passenger buys a ticket for a weekend city break, they do not pay for the damage that the flight's emissions cause to the climate. As a result, flying is often cheaper than taking a train for the same journey, even though the train is far less polluting. A higher tax would correct this imbalance. Some short trips that are currently taken simply because they are cheap would be replaced by rail travel or not taken at all, and airlines would have a stronger reason to invest in more efficient aircraft.

Critics argue that such a tax would be unfair, because it would make flying a luxury that only the rich could afford. This concern is valid, but it can be addressed. Rather than adding the same charge to every ticket, governments could introduce a tax that rises with the number of flights a person takes each year. A family flying once a year to visit relatives would pay little extra, while frequent business travellers would pay much more. In addition, the revenue could be spent on faster, cheaper rail services, giving people a realistic alternative.

In conclusion, I believe heavier taxes on flying are justified because the environmental cost of aviation is currently ignored. If the tax targets frequent flyers and funds cleaner transport, it can reduce emissions without unfairly excluding ordinary travellers.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear position and supporting it with well-developed reasoning about price and fairness. The counter-argument is acknowledged and then answered with a practical proposal, which strengthens the task response. Vocabulary such as "imbalance" and "revenue" is precise, and complex structures are controlled well.

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8 words

Vocabulary from the essay

  • aviation

    the business and activity of flying aircraft

  • greenhouse gases

    gases that trap heat in the atmosphere and warm the planet

  • emissions

    gases sent into the air, especially from vehicles or factories

  • imbalance

    a situation in which two things are not fair or equal

  • valid

    reasonable and acceptable

  • revenue

    money received, for example by a government from taxes

  • justified

    having a good reason

  • frequent flyers

    people who travel by plane very often

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for environment.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Higher taxes on air travel"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 291 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear position and supporting it with well-developed reasoning about price and fairness. The counter-argument is acknowledged and then answered with a practical proposal, which strengthens the task response. Vocabulary such as "imbalance" and "revenue" is precise, and complex structures are controlled well.

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