Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Self-service machines replacing staff: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 282 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Supermarkets, restaurants and banks increasingly use self-service machines instead of human staff. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I believe the disadvantages slightly outweigh the advantages unless businesses keep human staff available alongside the machines.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Machines cut queues and costs for businesses and suit customers who want quick, simple transactions.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    They exclude some customers, reduce jobs and remove social contact that matters to many people.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model282 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Touch-screen kiosks now take orders in fast-food restaurants, self-checkouts line the exits of supermarkets and many bank branches have replaced counters with machines. Although this trend offers clear benefits, I believe its disadvantages are slightly greater, unless businesses continue to provide human help.

From a business perspective, the advantages are significant. One employee can supervise several self-checkouts, so a supermarket can serve more customers with fewer staff and lower wage costs. Machines do not need breaks and can operate late at night, allowing branches to stay open longer. Many customers also appreciate the speed. A person buying two or three items can pay in under a minute rather than waiting behind a family with a full trolley, and some people simply prefer not to make conversation when they are in a hurry.

However, the drawbacks affect a wider group. Not everyone is comfortable with technology: older customers, people with poor eyesight and those who cannot read the local language often find these machines confusing and stressful. When a scanner fails to recognise an item, the customer may still have to wait for an assistant, so the promised speed disappears. There is also a cost to society. Checkout and counter roles have traditionally offered flexible, entry-level work to students and parents, and these opportunities are steadily disappearing. Finally, for lonely people, a brief chat with a cashier may be one of the few conversations they have all day.

In conclusion, self-service technology brings efficiency and savings, but these gains come largely at the expense of vulnerable customers and workers. I therefore believe that the disadvantages slightly outweigh the advantages, and that businesses should always keep staffed counters available for those who need them.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by reaching a clear, qualified judgement and supporting both sides with relevant examples from shops and banks. Paragraphs are logically sequenced and each is focused on one side of the argument. The writer shows good control of complex sentences and precise vocabulary such as "entry-level" and "at the expense of".

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • kiosks

    small machines or stands where customers can get a service

  • supervise

    to watch over a process to make sure it works properly

  • entry-level

    suitable for people with little or no experience

  • flexible

    able to change easily to suit different needs

  • efficiency

    doing something well without wasting time or money

  • at the expense of

    causing harm or loss to someone or something

  • recognise

    to identify something because it has been seen before

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for technology.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Self-service machines replacing staff"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 282 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by reaching a clear, qualified judgement and supporting both sides with relevant examples from shops and banks. Paragraphs are logically sequenced and each is focused on one side of the argument. The writer shows good control of complex sentences and precise vocabulary such as "entry-level" and "at the expense of".

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