Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Children owning smartphones: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 297 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think that children under the age of twelve should not be allowed to own a smartphone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I largely agree that children under twelve are better off without a personal smartphone, although a basic phone for safety is sensible.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Unrestricted smartphones expose young children to harmful content and habits they are not yet mature enough to manage.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Parents' concerns about safety and contact can be met by simpler devices rather than full smartphones.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model297 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Smartphones have become so common that many parents now buy one for a child at primary school age. While I accept that parents have legitimate reasons for wanting to stay in contact with their children, I largely agree that those under twelve should not have a smartphone of their own.

The main argument for this view is that a smartphone gives a young child access to far more than they can handle. With an internet connection, a child can come across violent or inappropriate material, be contacted by strangers or be drawn into online arguments with classmates. Even when parental controls are installed, determined children often find ways around them. There is also the question of habit. Games and video apps are designed to hold attention for as long as possible, and a nine-year-old has very little ability to stop voluntarily. A child who spends every evening scrolling may sleep less, read less and spend less time playing outside, all of which matter greatly at that stage of development.

Opponents argue that a phone keeps children safe, because parents can call them or track their location as they walk home. This is a reasonable concern, but it does not require a smartphone. A basic handset that can only make calls and send text messages provides the same reassurance without the distractions and risks of the internet. Some families also allow supervised use of a shared tablet at home, which lets children learn digital skills in a controlled setting rather than alone in their bedroom.

In conclusion, I believe that delaying smartphone ownership until around the age of twelve is a wise policy for most families. Children can still be reachable and digitally capable, but they are protected from pressures that they are not yet ready to face.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear, qualified position and keeping it consistent from introduction to conclusion. Each body paragraph develops one idea with concrete examples, and the second paragraph deals with the opposing view before answering it. Vocabulary such as "parental controls" and "reassurance" is precise, and complex sentences are used accurately.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • legitimate

    reasonable and acceptable

  • inappropriate

    not suitable for a particular person or situation

  • parental controls

    settings that let parents limit what a child can see or do on a device

  • voluntarily

    by choice, without being forced

  • reassurance

    something that makes a person feel less worried

  • supervised

    watched over by an adult or someone responsible

  • delaying

    making something happen at a later time

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for technology.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Children owning smartphones"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 297 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear, qualified position and keeping it consistent from introduction to conclusion. Each body paragraph develops one idea with concrete examples, and the second paragraph deals with the opposing view before answering it. Vocabulary such as "parental controls" and "reassurance" is precise, and complex sentences are used accurately.

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