Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Comparison of demographic trends in Australia and Malaysia between 1980 and 2002

The table below gives information about the population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Population statistics for Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002
CategoryAustralia 1980Australia 2002Malaysia 1980Malaysia 2002
Total population (millions)14.719.613.724.3
Male population (%)49.949.950.350.6
Female population (%)50.150.149.749.4
Birth rate (%)1.51.33.22.2
Average annual population growth (%)1.21.32.42.1
Population aged over 65 (%)9.612.43.74.3

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Band 8 sample answer

The table illustrates demographic changes in Australia and Malaysia over a 22-year period, comparing data from 1980 and 2002. Overall, it is evident that Malaysia experienced more rapid population growth than Australia, although both countries saw a decline in birth rates and a slight increase in the proportion of elderly citizens.

In 1980, Australia had a population of 14.7 million, which rose to 19.6 million by 2002. Conversely, Malaysia’s population grew more substantially, from 13.7 million to 24.3 million. Regarding gender distribution, both countries maintained a relatively balanced ratio, with Australia consistently showing 49.9% males and 50.1% females. Malaysia’s male population slightly increased from 50.3% to 50.6% over the period.

Birth rates in both nations declined, with Malaysia’s rate dropping from 3.2% to 2.2%, while Australia’s fell from 1.5% to 1.3%. Furthermore, the average annual population growth remained higher in Malaysia, despite a decrease from 2.4% to 2.1%. Finally, the percentage of the population aged over 65 was significantly higher in Australia, rising from 9.6% to 12.4%, whereas in Malaysia, this figure remained much lower, increasing only marginally from 3.7% to 4.3%.

182 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about tables

demographic
relating to the structure of human populations
proportion
a part or share in relation to whole
substantially
to a great or significant extent
consistently
in every case or on every occasion
marginally
to a small or insignificant degree
illustrates
provides a visual representation of data

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

While both nations experienced population growth, Malaysia saw a significantly higher rate of increase and a much younger demographic profile compared to Australia.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe tables?

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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