Academic Writing Task 1 · bar chart

Electricity production and consumption in the top ten countries in 2014

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Top ten countries for electricity production and consumption in 2014 (billion kWh)
02,0004,0006,0008,00010,000ChinaUnited StatesRussiaJapanIndiaCanadaFranceBrazilGermanyKorea, Rep.
  • Production (billion kWh)
  • Consumption (billion kWh)
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ChinaUnited StatesRussiaJapanIndiaCanadaFranceBrazilGermanyKorea, Rep.
Production (billion kWh)5,3984,0991,057936.2871618.9561.2530.7526.6485.1
Consumption (billion kWh)5,3223,8661,038856.7698.8499.9462.9455.8582.5449.5

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Band 8 sample answer

The bar chart illustrates the electricity production and consumption figures for the ten leading countries in 2014, measured in billion kWh. Overall, it is evident that China and the United States significantly outperformed the other eight nations in both categories. While most countries produced more electricity than they consumed, Germany stood out as an exception.

China led the rankings with 5,398 billion kWh produced and 5,322 billion kWh consumed, followed closely by the United States, which produced 4,099 billion kWh and consumed 3,866 billion kWh. The gap between these two leaders and the rest of the list was substantial; Russia, in third place, produced only 1,057 billion kWh and consumed 1,038 billion kWh.

Regarding the remaining countries, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, and the Republic of Korea all maintained a surplus in electricity production. Japan and India followed Russia with production figures of 936.2 and 871 billion kWh, respectively. Conversely, Germany was unique in this group, as its consumption of 582.5 billion kWh exceeded its production of 526.6 billion kWh. The Republic of Korea recorded the lowest figures among the top ten, with 485.1 billion kWh produced and 449.5 billion kWh consumed.

192 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about bar charts

outperformed
achieved better results than another entity or group
substantial
of considerable importance, size, or worth
surplus
an amount of something left over when requirements are met
conversely
introducing a statement that reverses a previous one
exception
a person or thing that is excluded from a rule
recorded
set down in writing or some other permanent form

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

China and the United States were the dominant nations in both electricity production and consumption, while Germany was the only country among the top ten to consume more electricity than it produced.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe bar charts?

Compare the biggest and smallest bars before anything else. If the bars show years, describe change; if they show places, describe rank. Round sensibly and say 'just over' or 'nearly' rather than guessing decimals.

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