Academic Writing Task 1 · table

Employment rates and average annual salaries of Australian university graduates in 2009

The table below gives information about the employment rates and the average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Employment rates and average annual salaries of new graduates in an Australian University in 2009
Areas of studyEmployment rateAverage annual salaries
Health93%$42,000
Law87%$59,000
Engineering and IT86%$59,000
Business78%$52,000
Arts and Social Science72%$50,000
Science62%$39,000

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Band 8 sample answer

The table illustrates the employment rates and average annual salaries for graduates across six different fields of study at an Australian university in 2009. Overall, it is evident that there is no direct correlation between high employment rates and higher salaries, as the field with the highest employment rate offered one of the lowest starting salaries.

Health graduates recorded the highest employment rate at 93%, although their average annual salary was relatively modest at $42,000. In contrast, Law and Engineering and IT graduates shared the highest average annual salaries at $59,000 each, with corresponding employment rates of 87% and 86% respectively. Business graduates followed with an employment rate of 78% and an average salary of $52,000.

At the lower end of the spectrum, Arts and Social Science graduates had an employment rate of 72% and earned an average of $50,000 annually. Science graduates experienced the lowest employment rate at 62% and also received the lowest average annual salary of $39,000. While Health graduates were the most likely to be employed, those in the Law and Engineering sectors were the most financially rewarded upon entering the workforce.

186 words. Every figure in the answer comes from the chart above.

How to write about tables

correlation
a mutual relationship or connection between two things
modest
relatively moderate or limited in amount or size
corresponding
having a close similarity or connection to something
spectrum
a range of different positions or values
financially rewarded
receiving a good amount of money for work
entering the workforce
starting to work in a professional career field

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Frequently asked questions

What should the overview say?

Health graduates enjoyed the highest employment rate, while Law and Engineering and IT graduates commanded the highest average annual salaries.

How long should an IELTS Task 1 answer be?

At least 150 words; 170 to 200 is the safe range. Spend about 20 minutes on it and leave 40 for Task 2, which carries twice the marks.

How do I describe tables?

Tables hide the trend: find the highest, lowest and biggest change yourself. Select; do not list every cell. Organise paragraphs by row or by column, whichever gives the clearer comparison.

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