Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

The cost of saving endangered species: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 279 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people believe that spending large amounts of money to protect endangered animals is a waste, as the money would be better spent on human needs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I disagree, because protecting endangered species also protects ecosystems that people depend on, and the sums involved are relatively small.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Healthy ecosystems provide food, clean water and protection from disasters, so conservation serves human needs too.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Conservation budgets are small compared with other spending, and there is also a moral duty to prevent extinction.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model279 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Governments and charities spend considerable sums on protecting rare animals, from breeding programmes to patrols against poachers. Some argue that this money should instead be used to help people in need. Although I understand this view, I largely disagree with it.

Firstly, the idea that animal conservation and human welfare are competing goals is misleading. Endangered species usually live in habitats such as forests, wetlands and coral reefs, and protecting the animal means protecting the whole area. These ecosystems provide services that people rely on. Forests help regulate rainfall and prevent soil erosion, wetlands filter water and reduce flooding, and coral reefs shelter coastlines from storms while supporting the fish that coastal communities eat. In many cases, conservation projects also employ local people as rangers or guides, and wildlife tourism can bring income to poor rural regions. Spending on endangered species is therefore often spending on human needs as well.

Secondly, the amount of money involved is relatively small. Conservation budgets are tiny compared with what most countries spend on defence, roads or healthcare, so redirecting them would make little difference to human poverty. Extinction, on the other hand, is permanent. Once a species has disappeared, no amount of money can bring it back. Many people would also argue that humans have a moral responsibility not to destroy other forms of life, especially when human activity is the main reason these animals are in danger.

In conclusion, while helping people must remain a priority, I do not believe that protecting endangered animals is a waste of money. Conservation supports the natural systems on which human life depends, and the relatively modest cost is worth paying to prevent irreversible loss.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by challenging the assumption in the prompt and building a clear, consistent argument against it. Each body paragraph develops a distinct reason with relevant examples, such as wetlands and coral reefs. Lexical resource is wide and precise, including topic-specific terms like "ecosystems" and "irreversible".

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • poachers

    people who illegally hunt or catch animals

  • misleading

    giving a wrong idea or impression

  • habitats

    the natural homes of animals or plants

  • ecosystems

    all the living things in an area and how they affect each other

  • soil erosion

    the gradual loss of the top layer of earth through wind or water

  • extinction

    the situation in which a type of animal or plant no longer exists

  • irreversible

    impossible to change back to how it was before

  • redirecting

    sending something to a different place or purpose

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for environment.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "The cost of saving endangered species"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 279 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by challenging the assumption in the prompt and building a clear, consistent argument against it. Each body paragraph develops a distinct reason with relevant examples, such as wetlands and coral reefs. Lexical resource is wide and precise, including topic-specific terms like "ecosystems" and "irreversible".

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