IELTS Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages · Academic

Should university students live away from home? Pros and cons

The question

In some countries, university students live at home with their families while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Plan before you write

Position:
Living away from home during university offers significant personal growth that outweighs the financial and emotional challenges of relocating.
Paragraph 2:
Relocating for university fosters independence and essential life skills through managing daily responsibilities without parental support.
Paragraph 3:
The primary drawbacks involve financial strain and potential loneliness, which can hinder a student's focus on their academic pursuits.
  1. If the question says outweigh, decide which side wins and say so in the introduction.
  2. One paragraph for advantages, one for disadvantages, each with a concrete example.
  3. The conclusion must give the verdict; listing both sides without one loses task response.

Band 8 sample essay

The decision for university students to reside either with their families or in a different city is a significant one. While staying at home provides stability, I believe that the benefits of living independently during this period far outweigh the associated disadvantages.

Moving away from home acts as a catalyst for personal development. By managing their own finances, cooking, and household administration, students cultivate a sense of autonomy that is rarely achieved in the family home. For instance, a student living in a university dormitory must learn to navigate conflicts with roommates and balance a tight budget, skills that are invaluable for their future professional lives. This transition forces young adults to mature rapidly, as they no longer have parental supervision to rely upon for daily logistics.

Conversely, the challenges of living away are not insignificant. The high cost of accommodation and living expenses can place immense pressure on students, sometimes forcing them to work long hours at the expense of their studies. Furthermore, the absence of a familiar support network can lead to feelings of isolation or homesickness, which may negatively impact mental well-being. For example, international students often report high levels of stress during their first semester due to the sudden lack of familial comfort and the daunting task of navigating an unfamiliar city alone.

In summary, although living independently poses financial and emotional hurdles, the long-term advantages of self-reliance and character building are superior. The experience of managing one's own life is a fundamental component of the higher education journey that prepares individuals for the demands of adulthood more effectively than remaining within the parental home.

269 words. Use the structure and the vocabulary, not the sentences.

Why this scores Band 8

This essay achieves Band 8 by providing a clear, well-supported argument with sophisticated vocabulary and cohesive devices. A Band 6 response typically fails to address both sides of the argument equally or relies on repetitive, simplistic language and lacks a clear, logical progression of ideas.

Vocabulary from the essay

catalyst
a person or thing that precipitates an event
autonomy
the right or condition of self-governing power
logistics
the detailed coordination of a complex operation
insignificant
too small or unimportant to be considered
familial
relating to or occurring in a family
hurdles
problems or difficulties that must be overcome
self-reliance
reliance on one's own powers and resources
daunting
seeming difficult to deal with in anticipation

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Should university students live away from home? Pros and cons"?

Advantages and disadvantages. If the question says outweigh, decide which side wins and say so in the introduction.

How long should the answer be?

At least 250 words. This sample is 269 words, written to fit 40 minutes with five minutes left to check grammar.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?

This essay achieves Band 8 by providing a clear, well-supported argument with sophisticated vocabulary and cohesive devices. A Band 6 response typically fails to address both sides of the argument equally or relies on repetitive, simplistic language and lacks a clear, logical progression of ideas.

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