Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

Online scams targeting older people: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 293 words
  • Problem and solution
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

More and more older people are being tricked by online scams and fraudulent messages. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to solve it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Older people are targeted because of limited digital experience and trusting habits, and the solution requires both education and action by banks and phone companies.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Many older people are new to online services and are used to trusting official-looking messages, while scams are becoming more convincing.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Community training, family support and stronger protections by banks and telecoms companies can reduce the harm.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model293 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

As banking, shopping and government services move online, criminals have found new ways to deceive people, and older adults are often their main targets. This essay will examine why this group is particularly vulnerable and suggest how the problem could be tackled.

The first cause is limited experience. Many people now in their seventies and eighties began using smartphones and online banking only recently, often because branches and offices closed. They may not recognise the warning signs that younger users notice instantly, such as a slightly misspelled web address or an unusual request for a password. Secondly, people of this generation were often brought up to trust official letters and polite callers, and fraudsters exploit this by pretending to be from a bank, the tax office or even a grandchild in trouble. Finally, scams themselves have become more sophisticated. Messages now copy the logos and language of real organisations so closely that even careful readers can be fooled.

Several measures could reduce the problem. Libraries and community centres could run free, regular workshops where older people learn to spot fake messages and practise what to do if they are unsure. Families also have a role to play: an agreed rule never to send money without first phoning a relative can stop many frauds. However, responsibility should not rest only with individuals. Banks could introduce delays and extra checks when a customer suddenly transfers a large sum to a new account, and phone companies could block numbers that are known to be used by criminals.

In conclusion, older people are targeted because they are newer to technology and more trusting, while scams grow ever more convincing. A combination of education, family support and stronger action by financial and telecommunications companies offers the best protection.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by fully addressing both causes and solutions, each in its own well-organised paragraph. Ideas are logically sequenced with clear referencing, and solutions are linked directly to the causes identified. Vocabulary such as "exploit" and "sophisticated" is used precisely, with accurate grammar throughout.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • deceive

    to make someone believe something that is not true

  • warning signs

    signals that something may be wrong or dangerous

  • fraudsters

    people who cheat others to get money

  • exploit

    to use a situation or weakness unfairly for your own benefit

  • sophisticated

    clever and complicated in the way it works

  • workshops

    meetings where people learn by doing practical activities

  • convincing

    making people believe something is true

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for technology.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Online scams targeting older people"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 293 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by fully addressing both causes and solutions, each in its own well-organised paragraph. Ideas are logically sequenced with clear referencing, and solutions are linked directly to the causes identified. Vocabulary such as "exploit" and "sophisticated" is used precisely, with accurate grammar throughout.

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