Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

Overspending and personal debt: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 282 words
  • Problem and solution
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many people today are in debt because they spend more money than they earn. Why does this happen, and what can be done to help people manage their money better?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Debt is driven by easy credit, social pressure and weak financial education, and it can be tackled through teaching, stricter lending rules and support services.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Credit is easy to obtain, spending online feels unreal, and advertising and social media push people to buy.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Money lessons in schools, stricter checks by lenders and free debt advice would help people manage money better.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model282 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

It has become common for people to rely on credit cards, loans and overdrafts to pay for everyday expenses, and many end up with debts they cannot repay. This essay will discuss why people overspend and suggest how they could be helped to manage their finances.

One major reason is that borrowing has never been easier. Credit cards can be obtained within minutes online, and many shops offer instalment plans at the checkout, so people can buy items they cannot currently afford. Paying with a card or phone also makes spending feel less real than handing over cash, which encourages impulse purchases. In addition, advertising and social media create constant pressure to own the latest products and enjoy expensive holidays, and people may feel embarrassed if they cannot keep up with friends. Finally, many adults were never taught how interest works or how to plan a budget, so they underestimate how quickly small debts can grow.

Several steps could help. Schools should teach practical money skills, such as creating a monthly budget, comparing interest rates and understanding the true cost of borrowing. Lenders should be required to check carefully whether a customer can afford repayments before offering credit, and to show the total cost of a loan clearly. Banking apps could also help by sending alerts when spending is higher than usual. For those already in difficulty, free and confidential debt advice services can help people organise their repayments and avoid turning to expensive lenders.

In conclusion, people overspend because credit is easy to access, social pressure is strong and financial education is often lacking. Better teaching, more responsible lending and accessible advice would help many people regain control of their finances.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by fully addressing both parts of the question, with each solution linked to a cause. The organisation is clear, and cohesive devices are used flexibly rather than mechanically. Vocabulary such as "impulse purchases" and "instalment plans" is precise and relevant to the topic.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • overdrafts

    arrangements that let you take more money from a bank account than you have

  • instalment plans

    ways of paying for something in several smaller amounts over time

  • impulse purchases

    things bought suddenly without planning

  • underestimate

    to think something is smaller or less serious than it is

  • budget

    a plan of how much money will be spent

  • confidential

    private and not shared with others

  • regain control

    to be in charge of something again

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for economy and money.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Overspending and personal debt"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 282 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by fully addressing both parts of the question, with each solution linked to a cause. The organisation is clear, and cohesive devices are used flexibly rather than mechanically. Vocabulary such as "impulse purchases" and "instalment plans" is precise and relevant to the topic.

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