Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

Unaffordable housing in cities: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 303 words
  • Problem and solution
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many cities, housing has become too expensive for ordinary people to buy or rent. What are the causes of this problem, and what measures could governments take to solve it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Unaffordable housing stems mainly from a shortage of homes and property speculation, and governments can address it by increasing supply and regulating the market.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Planning rules and scarce land limit building, while investors buy homes for profit and leave some empty.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Simpler planning, social housing, taxes on empty and multiple homes, and limits on rent rises would help.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model303 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many large cities, the cost of buying or renting a home has risen far beyond what ordinary workers can afford. In my view, this problem stems mainly from a shortage of new housing and the treatment of property as an investment, and governments can address it by increasing supply and regulating the market more effectively.

The most fundamental cause is that housing supply has not kept pace with demand. Cities attract people because they offer jobs and services, but planning restrictions, a shortage of available land and slow approval processes often limit the number of new homes that can be built. When many people compete for a limited number of properties, prices inevitably rise. A second cause is that property has become a popular investment. Wealthy individuals and companies buy homes in desirable cities not to live in but to rent out at high prices or to sell later for a profit, and some properties are left empty for long periods. This reduces the number of homes available to local residents.

Governments have several tools to tackle these causes. Firstly, they could simplify planning rules and release public land for construction, particularly near public transport, so that more homes are built more quickly. Secondly, they could fund the construction of social housing with rents linked to local incomes, ensuring that essential workers such as nurses and teachers can live near their workplaces. Thirdly, higher taxes on empty homes and on owners of multiple properties would discourage speculation and encourage owners to rent out or sell unused housing. Finally, regulations limiting sharp rent increases could give tenants greater security.

In conclusion, unaffordable urban housing is largely the result of limited supply and investment-driven demand. By increasing construction, building social housing and discouraging speculation, governments can make city homes more accessible to ordinary people.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: each proposed measure responds directly to a cause identified in the previous paragraph, giving the essay strong coherence. Topic vocabulary such as 'speculation' and 'social housing' is used accurately, and ideas are sequenced clearly without mechanical overuse of connectors.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • kept pace with

    increased at the same rate as

  • planning restrictions

    official rules that limit what can be built and where

  • inevitably

    in a way that cannot be avoided

  • social housing

    homes provided at low rent by the government or non-profit groups

  • speculation

    buying something in the hope of selling it later for a profit

  • tenants

    people who rent a home from a landlord

  • investment-driven

    caused mainly by people seeking a financial return

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Unaffordable housing in cities"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 303 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: each proposed measure responds directly to a cause identified in the previous paragraph, giving the essay strong coherence. Topic vocabulary such as 'speculation' and 'social housing' is used accurately, and ideas are sequenced clearly without mechanical overuse of connectors.

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