Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Workplace dress codes: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 304 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think that employers should be able to require staff to wear formal clothes at work, while others believe employees should be free to dress as they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Dress codes are justified in roles that involve the public, but elsewhere employees should have considerable freedom.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Formal dress shapes how customers see an organisation, creates unity and is essential for safety in some jobs.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Clothing has little link to the quality of most work, and freedom shows trust and respects cultural dress.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model304 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Rules about clothing vary greatly between workplaces, from strict uniforms to complete freedom. While some argue that employers have every right to insist on formal dress, others feel that staff should choose for themselves. In my opinion, dress codes are justified in roles that involve the public, but elsewhere employees should be given considerable freedom.

Those who support formal dress codes believe that appearance affects how an organisation is perceived. A customer visiting a bank or meeting a lawyer may feel more confident in the service if the staff look professional and smartly dressed. Dress codes can also create a sense of unity and remove distractions, as nobody needs to worry about whether their outfit is fashionable enough. For jobs involving safety, such as construction or laboratory work, specific clothing is of course essential rather than optional.

On the other hand, many people argue that what employees wear has little connection to the quality of their work. A software developer who spends the day writing code is unlikely to perform better in a suit and tie, and may actually feel less comfortable and productive. Allowing staff to dress as they choose can also show that an employer trusts them as adults, which may improve morale. Furthermore, strict rules can sometimes conflict with religious or cultural dress, and employees may feel that their identity is being disregarded.

On balance, I believe the right approach depends on the nature of the role. Where staff represent the company to clients, it is reasonable to require a smart standard, although rules should be flexible enough to respect cultural and religious needs. For employees who rarely meet the public, comfortable everyday clothing is perfectly acceptable.

In conclusion, employers may reasonably set dress standards for customer-facing staff, but in most other roles employees should be trusted to decide for themselves.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by discussing both views with relevant examples and reaching a nuanced opinion that is clearly signalled. Paragraphs are well organised around topic sentences, and the writer uses a good range of vocabulary and complex structures with accuracy.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • perceived

    seen or understood in a particular way

  • unity

    the state of being joined together as a group

  • optional

    available to choose but not required

  • morale

    the level of confidence and enthusiasm in a group

  • disregarded

    ignored or treated as unimportant

  • customer-facing

    dealing directly with customers

  • flexible

    able to change to suit different situations

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for work and careers.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Workplace dress codes"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 304 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by discussing both views with relevant examples and reaching a nuanced opinion that is clearly signalled. Paragraphs are well organised around topic sentences, and the writer uses a good range of vocabulary and complex structures with accuracy.

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