Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Young adults living with their parents: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 308 words
  • Two-part question
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many countries, an increasing number of young adults continue to live with their parents into their late twenties or thirties. Why is this happening? What effects does this have on families?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Young adults stay at home mainly for economic reasons, with mixed effects on families.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    High housing costs, longer education, student debt, insecure work and later marriage all delay leaving home.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Families can save money and grow closer, but sharing a home may cause tension and slow young people's independence.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model308 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many countries, it has become increasingly common for young adults to remain in the family home well into their late twenties or even their thirties. This trend is largely driven by economic pressures, and its effects on families are mixed, bringing financial and emotional benefits but also strains on relationships and independence.

The main reason for this change is the cost of housing. In many cities, rents and property prices have risen much faster than the salaries of young workers, so moving out would consume a large proportion of their income. Longer periods of education are also significant: young people who study for a master's degree or complete unpaid internships may not earn a full salary until their mid-twenties, and some leave university with debts to repay. In addition, insecure employment, such as short-term contracts, makes it risky to commit to a lease. Finally, in some cultures it has always been normal for children to stay at home until marriage, and later marriage naturally extends this period.

The effects on families are both positive and negative. On the positive side, living together allows young adults to save money for a deposit on their own home, and parents may benefit from help with household tasks or, later, with caring for older relatives. Many families also enjoy a closer relationship as parents and children come to know one another as adults. On the other hand, sharing a home can create tension over issues such as privacy, household rules and contributions to bills. Some parents may also find that their own plans, such as downsizing or retiring, are delayed, while young adults may develop independence and practical skills more slowly.

In conclusion, young people are staying at home mainly for economic reasons. While this arrangement can bring families closer and ease financial pressure, it requires clear agreements to prevent conflict.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions receive a full, well-supported answer, and the second body paragraph considers effects on parents as well as on young adults. A wide range of causes is linked with clear cohesive devices, and topic vocabulary such as 'insecure employment' and 'downsizing' is accurate.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • strains

    pressures that cause difficulty or tension

  • unpaid internships

    periods of work experience for which a person receives no salary

  • insecure employment

    jobs that may end at short notice

  • lease

    a legal agreement to rent a home for a period

  • deposit

    an amount of money paid at the start when buying a home

  • downsizing

    moving to a smaller home

  • tension

    a feeling of anxiety or unfriendliness between people

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for family.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Young adults living with their parents"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 308 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions receive a full, well-supported answer, and the second body paragraph considers effects on parents as well as on young adults. A wide range of causes is linked with clear cohesive devices, and topic vocabulary such as 'insecure employment' and 'downsizing' is accurate.

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