Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Young people spending on brands and gadgets: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 297 words
  • Two-part question
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many young people today spend a large proportion of their money on branded clothes and the latest electronic devices. Why do they do this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    There are several reasons for this behaviour, and although it has limited benefits, it is largely a negative trend.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Young people seek peer acceptance, influencers present products as essential, and advertising targets them deliberately.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Spending can teach responsibility, but it links self-worth to possessions, creates waste and can lead to debt.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model297 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Young people are often criticised for spending heavily on designer clothing and new smartphones. There are several reasons for this behaviour, and although it has some limited benefits, I believe it is largely a negative trend.

The most important reason is the desire for social acceptance. During adolescence and early adulthood, people are particularly concerned with how they are seen by their peers, and branded products act as visible symbols of status. A teenager who wears the same trainers as popular classmates may feel more confident and included. Social media has strengthened this pressure, since influencers constantly display new products and present them as essential to an attractive lifestyle. Advertising is also deliberately targeted at young consumers, who are seen as likely to remain loyal to a brand for many years.

There are some positive aspects. Many young people earn the money they spend through part-time jobs, and choosing how to use it can teach them to make decisions and take responsibility. In addition, modern devices are genuinely useful for study, communication and creative activities, so not all such spending is wasteful.

Nevertheless, the disadvantages are more significant. When self-worth becomes linked to possessions, young people may feel inadequate if they cannot afford the latest items, and this can harm their mental wellbeing. The constant replacement of phones and clothing that are still in good condition also creates a great deal of waste, which damages the environment. Furthermore, habits formed early may continue into adulthood, leading some to rely on credit to sustain a lifestyle they cannot afford.

In conclusion, young people spend heavily on brands mainly because of peer pressure, social media and targeted advertising. Although this spending can teach responsibility, it often damages wellbeing, finances and the environment, so I consider the trend mainly negative.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions and reaching a clear evaluation after considering both sides. Reasons are supported with a concrete example, and the writer uses accurate vocabulary such as 'adolescence' and 'deliberately targeted' with a good range of sentence types.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • adolescence

    the period of life between childhood and adulthood

  • peers

    people of the same age or social group

  • status

    a person's social position compared with others

  • influencers

    people who use social media to affect what others buy or think

  • deliberately

    on purpose

  • inadequate

    not good enough

  • sustain

    to keep something going

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for society.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Young people spending on brands and gadgets"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 297 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions and reaching a clear evaluation after considering both sides. Reasons are supported with a concrete example, and the writer uses accurate vocabulary such as 'adolescence' and 'deliberately targeted' with a good range of sentence types.

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