Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Government support for traditional crafts: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 296 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Governments should spend money to support people who practise traditional crafts, such as weaving, pottery and woodcarving. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I agree that governments should provide some financial support for crafts, targeted carefully and not at the expense of essential services.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Crafts hold knowledge built up over generations that survives only if people keep practising and teaching it.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Handmade products attract tourists and customers, creating income in rural areas with few other jobs.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model296 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Traditional crafts such as weaving, pottery and woodcarving are practised by fewer people every year, as cheap factory-made goods replace handmade items. I agree that governments should provide some financial support for these crafts, although this support should be targeted carefully and should not come at the expense of essential services.

The main reason for public support is that crafts are an important part of a nation's cultural heritage. They often contain knowledge accumulated over many generations, such as local techniques for dyeing cloth or shaping clay, and once the last practitioners stop working, this knowledge may be lost permanently. Unlike buildings or documents, a skill cannot simply be stored in a museum; it survives only if people continue to practise and teach it. Modest government funding for workshops and apprenticeships can ensure that these skills are passed on.

There are economic benefits as well. Handmade products are attractive to tourists and to customers who value quality and authenticity, so crafts can provide income in rural areas where other employment is limited. A village known for its distinctive pottery, for instance, may draw visitors who also spend money in local shops and guesthouses. Government support, such as help with marketing or selling online, can help craftspeople reach these customers.

Some people argue that public money should be spent on healthcare, education and housing instead. This is a fair point, and crafts should certainly not be funded at the expense of these priorities. However, the sums needed to support crafts are relatively small, and much of the help could come in the form of training schemes and advice rather than direct payments.

In conclusion, I largely agree that governments should support traditional crafts. Doing so protects valuable heritage and supports rural economies, provided the funding remains proportionate.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear position, supporting it with two developed reasons, and addressing the strongest counter-argument. Vocabulary such as 'practitioners' and 'proportionate' is accurate, and sentence structures are varied and well controlled.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • accumulated

    gathered gradually over time

  • practitioners

    people who regularly do a particular activity or skill

  • permanently

    for ever

  • apprenticeships

    periods of learning a skill by working with an expert

  • authenticity

    the quality of being genuine or original

  • distinctive

    easy to recognise because it is different

  • proportionate

    of a suitable size compared with something else

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for culture and tradition.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Government support for traditional crafts"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 296 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear position, supporting it with two developed reasons, and addressing the strongest counter-argument. Vocabulary such as 'practitioners' and 'proportionate' is accurate, and sentence structures are varied and well controlled.

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