Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Preventing illness or treating the sick: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 307 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think that governments should spend more money on preventing illness, while others believe that treating people who are already ill should be the priority. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Treatment must be properly funded, but governments should move a greater share of spending towards prevention.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Treatment is urgent, visible and morally essential, while prevention brings slow and uncertain results.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Many common illnesses are preventable, and early detection is simpler and cheaper than later treatment.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model307 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Every health system must decide how to divide limited funds between keeping people healthy and caring for those who are already unwell. Some argue that prevention deserves more money, while others insist that treatment must come first. In my opinion, treatment must always be adequately funded, but governments should shift a greater share of spending towards prevention.

Those who prioritise treatment make a powerful moral argument. A person with cancer or a serious injury needs care immediately, and a government that left patients waiting for operations in order to fund health campaigns would be failing in its most urgent duty. Furthermore, the results of treatment are visible and immediate, whereas the benefits of prevention may take decades to appear and are difficult to measure. Politicians and the public therefore find it easier to support new hospital beds than an advertising campaign about healthy eating.

However, there are convincing reasons to invest more in prevention. Many of the illnesses that fill hospitals today, such as heart disease, type 2 diabetes and some cancers, are closely linked to smoking, poor diet and lack of exercise. Programmes that help people to stop smoking, vaccination schemes and regular health checks can prevent these conditions or detect them early, when treatment is simpler and cheaper. For example, identifying high blood pressure during a routine check and treating it with inexpensive medication may prevent a stroke that would otherwise require months of hospital care and rehabilitation.

I believe that prevention and treatment should not be seen as rivals. In the long term, effective prevention reduces the number of people needing expensive treatment, which frees resources for those who still fall ill.

In conclusion, while treating sick people must remain a priority, greater investment in preventing illness is the wisest way to protect public health and to keep health systems affordable in the future.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting both views with relevant reasons and a specific example, then reaching an opinion that connects the two sides. The essay moves logically from immediate needs to long-term benefits, and less common vocabulary such as "rehabilitation" is used accurately in context.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • adequately

    enough for a particular need

  • prioritise

    to treat something as more important than other things

  • moral argument

    a reason based on what is right or wrong

  • vaccination schemes

    organised programmes to protect people against disease

  • detect

    to discover or notice something

  • rehabilitation

    help to recover after an illness or injury

  • rivals

    things that compete with each other

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for health.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Preventing illness or treating the sick"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 307 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting both views with relevant reasons and a specific example, then reaching an opinion that connects the two sides. The essay moves logically from immediate needs to long-term benefits, and less common vocabulary such as "rehabilitation" is used accurately in context.

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