Writing Task 2 · Opinion (agree or disagree)

Small businesses versus multinationals: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 opinion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 290 words
  • Opinion (agree or disagree)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Large multinational companies are forcing many small local businesses to close. Some people think governments should take action to protect small businesses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Opinion (agree or disagree)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I agree that governments should support small businesses, but through fair competition and lower costs rather than by blocking multinationals.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Small firms keep money in local communities, give town centres character and provide a route into business ownership.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Multinationals offer low prices and jobs, so support should target unfair advantages such as tax avoidance and high business rates.

  • →State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.
  • →One useful approach is to develop a main reason in each body paragraph, supported by explanation or an example.
  • →A qualified or partial agreement is fine when its limits are clear and supported.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model290 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many towns, independent shops, cafés and family firms have closed as international chains have expanded. Some people believe governments should step in to protect these smaller businesses. I agree that government support is justified, although it should aim to create fair competition rather than to shut out large companies.

Small local businesses bring benefits that are easy to overlook. A greater share of the money spent in an independent shop tends to stay in the area, because the owner lives locally, employs local people and often buys from nearby suppliers. These businesses also give high streets their distinctive character; a town full of independent bakeries and bookshops feels very different from one with the same chains found everywhere else. Furthermore, small firms offer ordinary people a realistic route to running their own business, which encourages enterprise and new ideas.

At the same time, multinationals cannot simply be blamed. They often provide lower prices, wider choice and stable employment, and many consumers clearly value these benefits. Blocking them would raise costs for families and reduce investment. The real problem is that competition is sometimes unfair. Large corporations can use complex structures to pay very little tax in the countries where they trade, and they can afford to sell at a loss for long periods to drive rivals out of the market. Governments should therefore close tax loopholes, enforce competition law strictly and reduce the business rates paid by small shops, which are often a heavy burden.

In conclusion, I agree that governments have a role in protecting small businesses, because of their value to local economies and communities. However, the best way to do this is to remove the unfair advantages enjoyed by multinationals, not to keep them out altogether.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving a clear, qualified answer and developing the reasons for it in depth. The second body paragraph acknowledges the benefits of multinationals before narrowing the argument to unfair competition, showing sophisticated task response. Vocabulary such as "tax loopholes" and "enterprise" is precise and well chosen.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • independent

    not owned or controlled by a larger company

  • distinctive character

    special qualities that make a place different from others

  • enterprise

    the activity of starting and running businesses

  • multinationals

    large companies that operate in many countries

  • drive rivals out of the market

    force competitors to stop trading

  • tax loopholes

    gaps in tax law that allow people or firms to pay less

  • business rates

    a tax paid on property used for business

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for economy and money.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Small businesses versus multinationals"?+

Opinion (agree or disagree). State a clear position in the introduction and develop it consistently throughout the essay.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 290 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving a clear, qualified answer and developing the reasons for it in depth. The second body paragraph acknowledges the benefits of multinationals before narrowing the argument to unfair competition, showing sophisticated task response. Vocabulary such as "tax loopholes" and "enterprise" is precise and well chosen.

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