Writing Task 2 · Problem and solution

Smartphone overuse and poor concentration: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 294 words
  • Problem and solution
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many people find it increasingly difficult to concentrate because they check their phones constantly. Why is this happening, and what can be done about it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Constant phone checking is caused by app design and social pressure, and it can be reduced through personal habits and changes by schools, employers and developers.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Apps are built to capture attention, and people feel they must reply immediately to messages.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Individuals can create phone-free periods, and institutions and designers can reduce the pressure to stay connected.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model294 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Many people now find it hard to read a few pages of a book or finish a piece of work without reaching for their phone. This habit has several causes, but there are also practical steps that could help people regain their ability to concentrate.

The main reason lies in the way many apps are designed. Social media and video platforms earn money from advertising, so they benefit when users spend as long as possible on them. Features such as endless scrolling, automatic playing of the next video and frequent notifications are intended to make it difficult to stop. Each new message or "like" provides a small reward, and over time the brain comes to expect these interruptions. Social expectations also play a part. Because messages arrive instantly, people feel obliged to reply instantly, whether the message comes from a friend, a colleague or a manager sending emails late in the evening.

Tackling this requires action at more than one level. Individuals can make simple changes, such as switching off non-essential notifications, keeping the phone in another room while studying and setting aside specific times to check messages. Schools could ban phones from classrooms, which removes temptation and allows pupils to focus on lessons. Employers also have a responsibility: a clear policy that staff are not expected to answer messages outside working hours would ease the pressure to stay constantly connected. Finally, technology companies could be encouraged to offer built-in tools that show users how much time they spend on each app and allow them to set daily limits.

In conclusion, constant phone checking results from deliberate app design and social pressure to respond immediately. Personal discipline, supported by sensible rules in schools and workplaces and more responsible design, can help people concentrate again.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining causes in depth and proposing solutions at individual, institutional and industry levels. The organisation is clear, with each paragraph built around a strong topic sentence. Collocations such as "set aside specific times" and "ease the pressure" show a natural, flexible lexical resource.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • regain

    to get something back after losing it

  • notifications

    messages on a phone that tell you something new has happened

  • interruptions

    things that stop an activity for a short time

  • obliged

    feeling that you must do something

  • non-essential

    not completely necessary

  • temptation

    the wish to do something, especially something you should not do

  • deliberate

    done on purpose

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for technology.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Smartphone overuse and poor concentration"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 294 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining causes in depth and proposing solutions at individual, institutional and industry levels. The organisation is clear, with each paragraph built around a strong topic sentence. Collocations such as "set aside specific times" and "ease the pressure" show a natural, flexible lexical resource.

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