Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Tourist taxes in popular destinations: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 288 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some popular cities now charge visitors a daily tourist tax. Some people think this is a fair way to pay for the costs of tourism, while others believe it discourages visitors and harms local businesses. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I believe a modest tourist tax is fair, provided the money is visibly spent on the places and services tourists use.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Supporters argue that visitors use public services and add to crowding, so they should contribute to the costs.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Critics fear higher costs will push tourists elsewhere and hurt hotels, restaurants and shops that rely on them.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model288 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

A growing number of popular cities add a small charge to each night that a visitor stays. Some people regard this as a fair contribution towards the costs of tourism, while others believe it drives visitors away and damages businesses. In my opinion, a modest tax is reasonable if the money is used wisely.

Supporters of the tax point out that large numbers of tourists place real pressure on a city. Streets need cleaning more often, public toilets and transport must cope with extra users, and historic buildings and parks suffer wear and tear. These costs are usually paid by local taxpayers, many of whom gain little from tourism and may even suffer from crowded streets and rising rents. A small daily charge means that visitors share the cost of maintaining the attractions they come to see. In the busiest destinations, it may also slightly reduce overcrowding during peak seasons.

On the other hand, opponents argue that any extra charge makes a destination less attractive. Families on a budget, students and backpackers may decide to visit a neighbouring city that does not charge a tax, and every lost visitor means less money for hotels, restaurants and shops. Small guesthouses, in particular, may find the paperwork involved in collecting the tax time-consuming. Critics also complain that the revenue often disappears into general government spending rather than being used to improve tourist areas.

In my view, a tourist tax is fair as long as it is kept low and the money is clearly spent on things that visitors and residents can see, such as cleaner streets, better transport and the restoration of historic sites. When the benefits are visible, most travellers will accept a small charge without changing their plans.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting both views fairly, each supported by specific and relevant examples. The writer's opinion is clear and conditional, and the conclusion explains exactly what would make the tax acceptable. Vocabulary such as "wear and tear" and "restoration" is accurate and natural for the topic.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • contribution

    money given to help pay for something

  • wear and tear

    damage caused by normal use over time

  • taxpayers

    people who pay tax to the government

  • peak seasons

    the busiest times of year for travel

  • backpackers

    people who travel cheaply carrying their belongings in a bag on their back

  • time-consuming

    taking a lot of time

  • restoration

    the work of repairing an old building so it looks as it did originally

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for economy and money.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Tourist taxes in popular destinations"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 288 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by presenting both views fairly, each supported by specific and relevant examples. The writer's opinion is clear and conditional, and the conclusion explains exactly what would make the tax acceptable. Vocabulary such as "wear and tear" and "restoration" is accurate and natural for the topic.

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