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Tourist damage to natural attractions: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 286 words
  • Problem and solution
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Large numbers of visitors to natural attractions such as mountains, forests and coral reefs are causing serious damage. What problems does this cause, and what measures could be taken to protect these places?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Mass tourism harms natural attractions, but careful management and visitor education can reduce the damage.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Crowds cause erosion, broken coral and pollution, and they disturb wildlife.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Permit systems, protective paths, rotating closures and education for visitors and guides would protect these places.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model286 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Natural wonders attract more visitors than ever, thanks to cheaper travel and the influence of photographs shared online. Unfortunately, this popularity is harming the very landscapes that people come to admire, but the damage can be reduced through careful management and visitor education.

The most visible problem is physical damage to the environment. When thousands of hikers use the same mountain trails, the soil erodes, plants are trampled and paths widen into bare scars across the hillside. In the sea, careless snorkellers and divers may touch or stand on coral, breaking structures that take many years to grow, while sun cream and boat fuel pollute the water. A second problem is the disturbance of wildlife. Noise, litter and people approaching animals for photographs can change feeding and breeding behaviour, and some species abandon areas that have become too busy.

Several measures could address these issues. Park authorities could introduce permit systems that limit the number of people entering a site each day, as many popular hiking routes already do. Fees from these permits could pay for rangers, boardwalks and clearly marked paths that keep visitors away from sensitive areas. In addition, some sites could be closed on a rotating basis, giving damaged areas time to recover. Education is equally important: short briefings before entry, signs explaining the rules and requirements for tour operators to train their guides would help visitors understand how their behaviour affects the environment. Finally, tourists themselves can choose less crowded alternatives and leave nothing behind.

In conclusion, mass tourism threatens natural attractions through erosion, pollution and the disturbance of wildlife. By controlling visitor numbers, funding protective infrastructure and educating travellers, authorities can ensure that these places survive for future generations to enjoy.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by matching each solution to a problem identified earlier and naming who could carry it out. Precise topic-specific vocabulary such as "erodes" and "permit systems" is used accurately, and a range of complex sentences is controlled with very few errors.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • erodes

    is gradually worn away

  • trampled

    crushed by being walked on

  • disturbance

    the act of interrupting normal behaviour or peace

  • abandon

    to leave a place and not return

  • permit systems

    schemes where people need official permission to enter

  • boardwalks

    raised wooden paths built over sensitive ground

  • on a rotating basis

    taking turns in a regular order

  • infrastructure

    basic structures such as paths, roads and buildings

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for travel and transport.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Tourist damage to natural attractions"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 286 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by matching each solution to a problem identified earlier and naming who could carry it out. Precise topic-specific vocabulary such as "erodes" and "permit systems" is used accurately, and a range of complex sentences is controlled with very few errors.

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