Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Raising the minimum wage: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 285 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people believe that raising the minimum wage is the best way to reduce the gap between rich and poor. Others argue that it leads to fewer jobs and higher prices. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I believe moderate, gradual increases in the minimum wage are valuable, but they work best alongside other policies.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Supporters say higher wages lift the lowest earners directly, reduce reliance on benefits and boost local spending.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Opponents warn that small employers may cut staff or raise prices, which can hurt the very people it aims to help.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model285 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

The gap between the highest and lowest earners has widened in many countries, and raising the legal minimum wage is often proposed as a solution. Supporters see it as a direct way to help the poorest workers, while critics fear it will destroy jobs. In my view, gradual increases are beneficial, but they cannot solve inequality on their own.

Those in favour argue that a higher minimum wage helps exactly the people who need it most. Cleaners, care workers and shop assistants often work long hours yet still struggle to pay for rent and food. Increasing their pay improves their living standards immediately, without requiring them to apply for government support. It may also benefit the wider economy, because low-paid workers tend to spend any extra income in local shops and services rather than saving it, which helps businesses in turn.

On the other hand, opponents warn of unintended consequences. A small restaurant or family-run shop operates on tight margins, and if wage costs rise sharply, the owner may reduce staff hours, employ fewer young people or replace workers with machines. Businesses may also pass on the higher costs to customers through price rises, which can reduce the real value of the increase. In regions where wages and prices are generally lower, a single national rate may be particularly difficult for employers to afford.

In my opinion, the minimum wage should rise steadily and predictably, giving businesses time to adjust, and the level should be set with advice from independent experts. However, reducing inequality also requires other measures, such as fairer taxation, affordable housing and better access to training, so that people can move into higher-paid work rather than relying on the minimum wage alone.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining both views in balanced detail and offering a clear, nuanced opinion. The argument progresses logically, and the conclusion extends the discussion with relevant further measures. Collocations such as "tight margins" and "unintended consequences" demonstrate a precise and flexible lexical resource.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • minimum wage

    the lowest amount of pay that employers are legally allowed to pay

  • inequality

    an unfair difference between groups in wealth or opportunity

  • living standards

    the level of comfort and wealth that people have

  • unintended consequences

    results of an action that were not planned

  • tight margins

    a small difference between costs and income

  • predictably

    in a way that can be expected in advance

  • pass on

    to make someone else pay a cost

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for economy and money.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Raising the minimum wage"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 285 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This response aims to illustrate Band 8 features by explaining both views in balanced detail and offering a clear, nuanced opinion. The argument progresses logically, and the conclusion extends the discussion with relevant further measures. Collocations such as "tight margins" and "unintended consequences" demonstrate a precise and flexible lexical resource.

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