Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Raising the state pension age: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 291 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many governments are raising the age at which people can receive a state pension. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Its advantages outweigh its disadvantages, if it is introduced gradually with protection for those unable to work.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    A later pension age keeps pensions affordable as fewer workers support each retiree, and many older people want to work.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Manual workers and those on low incomes lose out, and older workers may struggle to find new jobs.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model291 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Because people are living longer, many governments are raising the age at which citizens can claim a state pension. Although this policy has serious drawbacks for some workers, I believe its advantages outweigh its disadvantages, provided that it is introduced gradually and with protection for those who cannot continue working.

The main advantage is that it helps to keep pension systems affordable. In most countries, pensions are paid largely from the taxes of people currently in work. As life expectancy rises and birth rates fall, there are fewer workers supporting each retired person, and without reform the cost would have to be met by much higher taxes or cuts to other services. Raising the pension age spreads this burden more fairly between generations. In addition, many older people are healthy and wish to keep working, and their experience is valuable to employers, particularly in industries facing a shortage of skilled staff.

However, the policy also has clear disadvantages. Not everyone can work into their late sixties. People in physically demanding jobs, such as construction workers or nurses, may suffer from health problems that make continued work painful or impossible. Moreover, life expectancy is often lower among people on low incomes, so a higher pension age means they receive their pension for fewer years than wealthier citizens. Finally, older workers who lose their jobs may find it hard to be hired again, leaving them in financial difficulty until they reach the new pension age.

On balance, I believe raising the pension age is a necessary response to an ageing population. Nevertheless, governments must reduce the disadvantages by announcing changes well in advance, offering earlier support to those whose health prevents them from working, and encouraging employers to retrain and retain older staff.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the judgement is clear, conditional and supported by well-developed arguments on both sides. Cause and effect are explained precisely, for example in linking life expectancy to fairness, and the essay uses a range of accurate complex sentences.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • claim

    to ask for money that you have a right to receive

  • affordable

    cheap enough to be paid for

  • life expectancy

    the number of years a person is likely to live

  • spreads this burden

    shares a heavy responsibility among more people

  • physically demanding

    needing a lot of bodily strength or effort

  • well in advance

    a long time before something happens

  • retain

    to keep someone or something

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Raising the state pension age"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 291 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the judgement is clear, conditional and supported by well-developed arguments on both sides. Cause and effect are explained precisely, for example in linking life expectancy to fairness, and the essay uses a range of accurate complex sentences.

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