Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Investing in rural areas or cities: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 290 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people think governments should invest more in rural areas, for example in roads, internet access and healthcare, while others believe it is better to concentrate spending in cities, where most people live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Cities should not be neglected, but greater investment in rural areas is necessary for a fair and balanced country.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    City investment serves more people for the same cost and boosts the main engines of economic growth.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Rural residents deserve basic services, and investment there slows migration that overcrowds cities.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model290 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Governments must decide how to divide investment between cities and the countryside. Some argue that more money should go to rural areas, while others believe it is more efficient to focus spending on cities, where most of the population lives. In my opinion, cities should not be neglected, but greater investment in rural areas is necessary for a fair and balanced country.

Those who support concentrating spending in cities argue that this offers better value for money. A new hospital or railway line in a large city serves far more people than the same investment in a sparsely populated region. Cities are also the main engines of economic growth, attracting businesses and creating jobs, so improving their infrastructure can boost the whole national economy. From this perspective, spreading money thinly across remote areas wastes resources that could deliver greater benefits elsewhere.

On the other hand, supporters of rural investment point out that people in the countryside pay taxes too and deserve access to basic services. In many villages, poor roads, unreliable internet and distant hospitals make daily life difficult, and young people often feel forced to move to cities in search of work and education. This not only empties rural communities but also adds to overcrowding and high housing costs in urban areas. Fast broadband, for example, would allow rural residents to work remotely, start online businesses and access education without leaving home.

In my view, the second argument is more convincing. Although cities need continued investment, a country in which opportunity exists only in a few urban centres is neither fair nor sustainable. Targeted spending on rural transport, healthcare and digital connections would allow people to build good lives where they grew up while easing pressure on crowded cities.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both views are explained with relevant reasoning, and the writer's opinion is justified by showing how rural investment also benefits cities. The vocabulary is precise and idiomatic, as in 'spreading money thinly', and the paragraphing is clear and logical.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • neglected

    not given enough care or attention

  • sparsely populated

    having very few people living in an area

  • engines of economic growth

    the main sources of a country's increasing wealth

  • infrastructure

    basic systems such as roads, power and communications

  • spreading money thinly

    dividing money among so many uses that each gets too little

  • broadband

    a fast internet connection

  • sustainable

    able to continue over a long period

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Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Investing in rural areas or cities"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 290 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both views are explained with relevant reasoning, and the writer's opinion is justified by showing how rural investment also benefits cities. The vocabulary is precise and idiomatic, as in 'spreading money thinly', and the paragraphing is clear and logical.

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