Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Taxing sugary drinks: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 299 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some governments have introduced a tax on sugary drinks in order to improve public health. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The benefits of a sugary drinks tax are greater than its disadvantages.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Higher prices reduce consumption, push manufacturers to cut sugar, and raise revenue for health programmes.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    The tax hits low-income households, feels like interference and may shift people to other unhealthy foods.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model299 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Several governments have introduced a tax on sugary soft drinks in an attempt to reduce obesity and tooth decay. Although this policy has some disadvantages, I believe its benefits are greater.

The most important advantage is that a tax can change behaviour. When sugary drinks become more expensive, many consumers, especially young people with limited budgets, buy them less often or switch to cheaper alternatives such as water or reduced-sugar versions. Manufacturers may also respond by changing their recipes to lower the sugar content and avoid the tax, which improves products for everyone, including those who never read nutrition labels. A second advantage is that the revenue can be used for public health purposes. For instance, money raised from the tax could fund sports facilities in schools or programmes that teach families about healthy eating, so the policy addresses the problem from more than one direction.

There are, however, some disadvantages. Critics argue that such taxes fall most heavily on low-income households, which spend a larger share of their income on food and drink. In addition, some people resent what they see as government interference in personal choices, believing that adults should be free to decide what they consume. There is also a risk that consumers will simply replace sugary drinks with other unhealthy products, such as sweets or snacks, which are not taxed.

On balance, the advantages outweigh these drawbacks. The concern about low-income households is significant, but these families also suffer disproportionately from diet-related illness, so they may gain the most from healthier choices, particularly if the revenue is spent in their communities. Moreover, a tax does not ban anything; it simply makes the healthier option more attractive. Combined with education and clearer labelling, a tax on sugary drinks is a reasonable and effective public health measure.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the answer to the 'outweigh' question is stated at the start and justified in the conclusion by directly addressing the strongest objection. The essay shows a wide range of structures, including conditional and relative clauses, and collocations such as 'fall most heavily on' are natural and precise.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • obesity

    the condition of being extremely overweight

  • tooth decay

    damage to teeth, often caused by sugar

  • nutrition labels

    information on packaging about what food contains

  • fall most heavily on

    affect one group more than others

  • interference

    involvement in something that is not one's business

  • diet-related illness

    a disease caused partly by what people eat and drink

  • labelling

    the practice of putting information on products

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Taxing sugary drinks"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 299 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: the answer to the 'outweigh' question is stated at the start and justified in the conclusion by directly addressing the strongest objection. The essay shows a wide range of structures, including conditional and relative clauses, and collocations such as 'fall most heavily on' are natural and precise.

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