Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Upgrading devices or keeping them longer: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 282 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people like to buy the newest phone or computer as soon as it is released, while others prefer to keep their devices for as long as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    I believe that keeping devices for as long as they work well is the more sensible choice for most people.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Early buyers enjoy better features, security and performance, which can matter for work and creative hobbies.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Keeping devices longer saves money and reduces electronic waste, and older models usually meet everyday needs.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model282 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Technology companies release new phones and laptops every year, and some customers queue to buy them on the first day. Others use the same device until it stops working. Each approach has its supporters, but I believe that keeping devices for longer is the wiser choice for most people.

People who upgrade regularly point to real advantages. New models often have faster processors, better cameras and longer battery life, which can make a noticeable difference to someone who edits photos or works while travelling. Newer devices also receive security updates for longer, whereas older ones may eventually be left unprotected against viruses and fraud. For some, owning the latest model is also a source of enjoyment, in the same way that others enjoy buying new clothes or a better bicycle.

However, there are strong reasons to resist frequent upgrades. The most obvious is cost: a top-of-the-range phone can cost as much as a month's rent, and replacing it every year adds up to a considerable sum over a decade. In addition, the improvements between one model and the next are often minor, and a three-year-old device is perfectly adequate for messages, browsing and video calls. There is also an environmental cost. Phones contain metals that are mined at great expense to the planet, and many discarded devices end up in landfill rather than being recycled.

In my view, unless someone needs advanced features for their job, it makes more sense to look after a device, replace its battery when necessary and use it until it no longer meets their needs. This approach saves money and reduces waste, while still allowing people to upgrade when there is a genuine reason to do so.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by covering both views in balanced detail and giving a clear opinion that is consistent with the introduction. Each paragraph has a strong topic sentence and is extended with relevant everyday examples suited to the General Training task. Vocabulary such as "top-of-the-range" and "adequate" is natural and accurate.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • upgrade

    to replace something with a newer or better version

  • noticeable

    easy to see or notice

  • top-of-the-range

    the most expensive and best in a group of products

  • considerable

    large in size or amount

  • adequate

    good enough for a particular need

  • discarded

    thrown away because it is no longer wanted

  • landfill

    a place where rubbish is buried in the ground

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for technology.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Upgrading devices or keeping them longer"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 282 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This answer aims to illustrate Band 8 features by covering both views in balanced detail and giving a clear opinion that is consistent with the introduction. Each paragraph has a strong topic sentence and is extended with relevant everyday examples suited to the General Training task. Vocabulary such as "top-of-the-range" and "adequate" is natural and accurate.

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