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Long daily commutes to work: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 312 words
  • Problem and solution
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many cities, people spend a long time travelling to and from work every day. What problems does this cause, and what can be done to reduce commuting time?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Long commutes harm individuals and society, but flexible working and better planning can reduce them.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Lengthy journeys leave people tired and stressed, reduce family time and add to pollution and congestion.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Remote and flexible working, faster public transport and mixed neighbourhoods would shorten or remove many journeys.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model312 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

For many city workers, the daily journey to and from the office now takes up a significant part of the day. This situation harms both individuals and society, but it can be eased through changes to working practices and better urban planning.

Long commutes create problems for people's health and family life. A worker who spends two or three hours a day in traffic or on crowded trains has less time to exercise, cook proper meals or rest, and this gradually leads to tiredness and stress. Parents may leave home before their children wake up and return after they have gone to bed, which reduces the time they can spend together. On a wider scale, heavy commuter traffic adds to air pollution and congestion, and employees who arrive exhausted are often less productive.

Several measures could reduce this burden. First, employers could allow staff to work from home for part of the week or to choose flexible hours. Even two days at home would remove a large share of a worker's weekly travel, while staggered start times would spread passengers more evenly across the rush hour. Secondly, local authorities could invest in faster and more frequent public transport, such as express bus lanes and suburban rail links, so that taking the train becomes quicker than driving. Finally, in the longer term, planners should encourage mixed neighbourhoods where offices, shops and affordable housing are built close together. When people can live near their workplace, many journeys can be made on foot or by bicycle.

These solutions work best in combination. Flexible working offers immediate relief, whereas improvements to transport and housing take years but bring lasting change.

In conclusion, lengthy commutes damage well-being, family relationships and the urban environment. A combination of flexible working, improved public transport and smarter city planning would allow people to spend less time travelling and more time living.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by dealing fully with both parts of the question: problems are explained at personal and social levels, and each solution is linked to the person or body who could carry it out. Sequencing words organise the solutions clearly, and the short evaluative paragraph adds depth to the task response.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • commutes

    regular journeys between home and work

  • congestion

    too much traffic, so that movement is slow

  • burden

    something difficult that people have to deal with

  • staggered

    arranged to start at different times

  • rush hour

    the busy times when most people travel to or from work

  • suburban

    in the areas on the edge of a city where people live

  • mixed neighbourhoods

    areas with homes, shops and workplaces close together

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for travel and transport.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Long daily commutes to work"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 312 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by dealing fully with both parts of the question: problems are explained at personal and social levels, and each solution is linked to the person or body who could carry it out. Sequencing words organise the solutions clearly, and the short evaluative paragraph adds depth to the task response.

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