Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Local control over local decisions: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 296 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many countries, important decisions about local services are made by the national government rather than by local communities. Why is this the case? Should local communities have more control over decisions that affect them?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Centralisation exists for fairness and efficiency, but local communities should have more control over decisions affecting daily life.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Central control keeps standards consistent, follows tax revenue and coordinates large projects.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Local people understand local needs, feel ownership when involved and can test new ideas.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model296 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many countries, decisions about local services such as schools, roads and hospitals are taken by national governments rather than by the communities that use them. In my view, this centralisation exists mainly for reasons of fairness and efficiency, but local communities should be given greater control over decisions that directly affect their daily lives.

There are understandable reasons why national governments retain this power. Firstly, central control helps to ensure consistent standards across the country. If each area made its own decisions about education or healthcare, the quality of services might vary widely, and residents of poorer regions could receive worse provision. Secondly, national governments collect most tax revenue, so they naturally wish to control how it is spent. Finally, large projects such as motorways and railway networks cross many local boundaries and require coordination at a national level.

Nevertheless, I believe local communities should have more say. People who live in an area understand its needs far better than officials in a distant capital. For example, a town might need a new bus route to connect a housing estate with its main employer, a priority that national planners could easily overlook. When residents are involved in such decisions, through elected local councils or public consultations, the results are more likely to suit real needs, and people feel a greater sense of ownership over their neighbourhood. Local decision-making also allows different areas to try new approaches, and successful ideas can then be adopted elsewhere.

In conclusion, national governments control many local decisions in order to guarantee consistent standards and coordinate large projects. However, giving communities more power over matters such as local transport, parks and planning would produce services that better reflect local needs, while national standards could still protect against unfair differences between regions.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are fully answered, with the reasons for centralisation explained fairly before the writer argues for change. A specific local example makes the argument concrete, and less common vocabulary such as 'centralisation' and 'provision' is used with precision.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • centralisation

    the concentration of power in a single central authority

  • provision

    the act of supplying a service

  • coordination

    organising different groups so they work together well

  • have more say

    to have more influence over a decision

  • overlook

    to fail to notice or consider something

  • public consultations

    processes in which the public is asked for its views

  • sense of ownership

    a feeling of personal responsibility for something

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Local control over local decisions"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 296 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both questions are fully answered, with the reasons for centralisation explained fairly before the writer argues for change. A specific local example makes the argument concrete, and less common vocabulary such as 'centralisation' and 'provision' is used with precision.

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