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Rising online fraud: causes and solutions: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 309 words
  • Problem and solution
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Online fraud, such as fake shopping websites and scam messages, is becoming increasingly common. What are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Online fraud grows because victims are easy to reach and offenders are hard to catch, and it can be reduced through awareness and stronger action by banks and technology firms.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Criminals can contact huge numbers of people cheaply, often from abroad, and many users do not recognise the warning signs.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Awareness campaigns, payment checks, faster removal of fake sites and international police cooperation would make fraud harder.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model309 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Online fraud, from fake shopping websites to messages that trick people into revealing bank details, has become a widespread problem. This essay will argue that the growth of such crime stems mainly from the ease of reaching victims online and the difficulty of catching offenders, and that it can be reduced through a combination of public education and stronger action by technology companies and banks.

The first cause is that the internet allows criminals to contact enormous numbers of people at almost no cost. A fraudster can send thousands of convincing text messages in minutes, and even if only a tiny proportion of recipients respond, the scheme is profitable. A second cause is that offenders are often based in a different country from their victims, which makes investigation slow and prosecution rare. Because the risk of being caught is low, online fraud appears an attractive alternative to traditional theft. Finally, many people, particularly older users and those new to online banking, are not familiar with the warning signs of a scam.

Several measures could tackle these problems. Governments and banks could run awareness campaigns explaining common tactics, such as messages that create a false sense of urgency or ask the recipient to move money to a 'safe account'. Banks could also introduce delays and additional checks on unusually large payments to new recipients, giving customers time to reconsider. At the same time, technology companies should be required to remove fraudulent advertisements and fake websites quickly once they are reported. On an international level, closer cooperation between police forces would make it easier to trace and prosecute offenders who operate across borders.

In conclusion, online fraud thrives because it is cheap, low-risk and aimed at people who are unaware of the dangers. Better public awareness, safer banking procedures and international cooperation would make it considerably harder for criminals to succeed.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: it answers both parts of the question, linking each measure to a specific cause identified earlier. Paragraphing is logical, referencing is clear, and topic-specific vocabulary such as 'prosecution' and 'fraudulent' is used with precision.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • fraudster

    a person who tricks others in order to get money

  • prosecution

    the process of taking someone to court for a crime

  • awareness campaigns

    organised efforts to inform the public about a risk

  • tactics

    methods used to achieve a particular aim

  • fraudulent

    dishonest and intended to deceive people

  • trace

    to find where someone or something is

  • thrives

    grows or succeeds strongly

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Rising online fraud: causes and solutions"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 309 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: it answers both parts of the question, linking each measure to a specific cause identified earlier. Paragraphing is logical, referencing is clear, and topic-specific vocabulary such as 'prosecution' and 'fraudulent' is used with precision.

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