Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Rising stress among employees: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 311 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

More and more employees say that they suffer from stress and anxiety because of their jobs. Why is this happening? Who should be responsible for dealing with the problem: employers or employees themselves?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Heavier workloads and constant connectivity cause rising stress, and employers should take the leading role in tackling it.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Staff cuts, out-of-hours messages and job insecurity all increase pressure on workers.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Employers control working conditions, so they should set fair workloads and offer support, while employees set their own boundaries.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model311 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

A growing number of workers report that their jobs leave them stressed, anxious or exhausted. This trend is largely caused by heavier workloads and the difficulty of switching off from work, and I believe that while individuals have some responsibility for their own well-being, employers should take the leading role in addressing it.

There are several reasons why work-related stress is increasing. Many organisations have reduced staff numbers to save money, so the remaining employees must complete more tasks in the same amount of time. In addition, smartphones and email mean that workers can be contacted at any hour, and many feel obliged to reply to messages in the evening or at weekends. As a result, the boundary between work and rest has become blurred. Job insecurity is another factor, since employees on short-term contracts may worry constantly about whether their position will continue.

In my view, employers should bear the main responsibility for dealing with this problem because they control the conditions that cause it. A company can set realistic workloads, discourage emails outside working hours and train managers to recognise the signs of stress among their staff. Some firms already offer confidential counselling and flexible working arrangements, which can help employees cope before problems become serious. These measures also benefit employers, as stressed workers are more likely to take sick leave or resign.

Nevertheless, individuals also have a part to play. Employees can set boundaries, such as turning off notifications after work, and they should feel able to raise concerns with their manager at an early stage. Regular exercise and adequate sleep also help people manage pressure.

In conclusion, workplace stress is rising because of heavier workloads, constant connectivity and insecurity. Although workers should look after their own health, employers have the greater power and responsibility to create conditions in which stress does not develop in the first place.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions fully: three causes are explained, and the question of responsibility receives a clear answer with a balancing paragraph. Topic sentences make the structure easy to follow, and the writer uses a wide range of accurate complex sentences.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • switching off

    stopping thinking about work and relaxing

  • obliged

    feeling that one must do something

  • blurred

    no longer clear or distinct

  • job insecurity

    the worry that one might lose one's job

  • confidential counselling

    private advice and support for personal problems

  • sick leave

    time off work because of illness

  • connectivity

    being constantly linked to others through technology

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for health.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Rising stress among employees"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 311 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions fully: three causes are explained, and the question of responsibility receives a clear answer with a balancing paragraph. Topic sentences make the structure easy to follow, and the writer uses a wide range of accurate complex sentences.

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