Writing Task 2 · Discussion (both views)

Restricting leisure travel for the climate: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 discussion essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 306 words
  • Discussion (both views)
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Some people believe that international travel for leisure should be restricted because of its impact on the environment, while others argue that everyone has the right to travel freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Discussion (both views)

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Outright restrictions would be unjust, but travellers should pay more of the environmental cost of their trips.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Supporters of limits stress the emissions from flying and cruises and argue that a cap would share the burden fairly.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Opponents see travel as a freedom that builds understanding and supports poorer economies, and note that caps would be hard to enforce.

  • →Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.
  • →If the prompt asks for your opinion, state it clearly and support it throughout the response.
  • →A separate paragraph for each view can help organise the discussion; make the relationship between the views clear.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model306 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

International holidays have become affordable for millions of people, and this has raised concerns about the environmental cost of so much travel. Some argue that leisure trips abroad should be restricted, whereas others defend the freedom to travel. I believe outright restrictions would be unjust, but travellers should bear more of the environmental cost of their choices.

People who favour limits emphasise the damage caused by aviation. A long-haul return flight can produce more carbon than many people in poorer countries generate in an entire year, and air travel continues to grow. Cruise ships, meanwhile, pollute coastal waters and the air in port cities. From this perspective, a cap on the number of flights each person may take for pleasure would be a fair way to share the planet's limited capacity to absorb emissions.

Opponents, however, consider travel a basic freedom with important benefits. Visiting other countries allows people to understand different ways of life, and many developing economies rely heavily on tourism for jobs and foreign income. A strict limit would also be difficult to enforce and would probably hurt ordinary families who take one holiday a year more than wealthy frequent flyers who could find ways around the rules.

In my opinion, the most balanced approach is to make the price of travel reflect its environmental impact rather than to ban it. A tax that rises with the number of flights a person takes would leave an occasional holiday affordable while discouraging excessive flying, and the revenue could fund cleaner fuels and rail links. At the same time, governments could promote holidays closer to home that can be reached by train or coach.

In conclusion, the environmental concerns are serious, but rigid restrictions would be unfair and unworkable. Pricing that rewards responsible choices offers a better balance between personal freedom and protecting the planet.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both views are developed with relevant reasons, and the writer's own position is a distinct, well-argued middle path rather than a repetition of one side. The concession about who would be hurt by a cap shows critical thinking, and the vocabulary of policy and emissions is used accurately.

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8 words

Vocabulary from the essay

  • leisure

    free time spent relaxing or enjoying oneself

  • outright

    complete and total

  • aviation

    the operation and industry of aircraft

  • long-haul

    covering a very long distance

  • absorb

    to take in and hold something

  • frequent flyers

    people who travel by plane very often

  • revenue

    money that is collected, for example from a tax

  • unworkable

    not possible to put into practice successfully

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for travel and transport.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Restricting leisure travel for the climate"?+

Discussion (both views). Explain both views fairly, with reasons or examples for each.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 306 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features: both views are developed with relevant reasons, and the writer's own position is a distinct, well-argued middle path rather than a repetition of one side. The concession about who would be hurt by a cap shows critical thinking, and the vocabulary of policy and emissions is used accurately.

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