Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Storing photos and documents online: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 290 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many people now keep their photographs and important documents only in digital form, stored online. Why do people do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    People store files online for convenience, space and easy sharing, and I think this is mainly positive if they keep a backup.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Online storage is cheap, saves space and allows files to be found and shared instantly from any device.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    It is largely positive, but relying on a single online account creates risks of loss and hacking, so backups and some printed copies are wise.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model290 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In the past, families kept photographs in albums and important papers in a box at home. Today, many people store these things only on the internet. This essay will explain why this is happening and argue that it is largely a positive development, provided some sensible precautions are taken.

The main reason is convenience. A smartphone automatically uploads every picture to an online account, so people do not need to do anything to save them. Documents such as passports, insurance policies and bills can be scanned in seconds and found later by typing a single word, which is far quicker than searching through drawers. Space is another factor. Many people live in small flats and have no room for boxes of paper, whereas a cloud account can hold thousands of files at little or no cost. Finally, digital files are easy to share: grandparents abroad can see photographs of a new baby the same day they are taken.

In my view, this is mostly a positive change. Files stored online are protected from physical dangers such as fire, flooding or theft, which have destroyed many family albums in the past. People can also reach important documents when they are travelling, which can be extremely useful if a passport is lost. However, relying on a single online account is risky. If a password is forgotten, a company closes or an account is hacked, years of memories could disappear. It is therefore wise to keep a second copy on a separate hard drive and to print the photographs that matter most.

In conclusion, people store their records online because it is easy, cheap and convenient. This is a positive trend overall, as long as people do not depend on one service alone.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions fully in separate, clearly signposted paragraphs. The opinion is balanced but clear, and it is supported by practical everyday examples appropriate to General Training. Sentence structures are varied and accurate, and vocabulary is precise without being forced.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • precautions

    actions taken to avoid a possible problem

  • automatically

    without needing a person to do anything

  • insurance policies

    contracts that pay money if something goes wrong

  • scanned

    copied into digital form using a machine or phone

  • hacked

    entered illegally by someone using a computer

  • hard drive

    a device for storing computer data

  • depend on

    to need something in order to continue

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for technology.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Storing photos and documents online"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 290 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

The essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions fully in separate, clearly signposted paragraphs. The opinion is balanced but clear, and it is supported by practical everyday examples appropriate to General Training. Sentence structures are varied and accurate, and vocabulary is precise without being forced.

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